beautiful story.

VERY good story. I can see how much your writing has grown from this story to Collide. Your ability is wonderful.

I can't even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed that.

God, I love Edward Cullen. Too bad the best men are always fictional characters.

Amazing ending to the chapter.

Oh I forgot, in the chapter when they get down with each other for the first time since her change..."The training wheels are off now." - BEST. METAPHOR. EVER!

Great job getting rid of Jane!

Wow I just got goosebumps!

That was amazing. I loved the OC version, but this was even better. Bella did her best to hold the pain from Edward but he was truly a part of making her feel better throughout this.

This was much better than Bella's goodbye to Jacob in Eclipse. Not so gut-wrenchingly painful. At least, not as painful for her maybe.

I find I am loving your alternate-Breaking Dawn-universe.

Oh I like the idea of this dress so much more than the one in either the book or the movie. Although the one in the movie was spectacular.

LOVED

Very well written! I really enjoyed the story. Stayed true to the characters but had some very orginal ideas that I haven't seen in fan fics yet. Sometimes writers go overboard and get over zealous with plots and ideas. You do not! You give just enough to keep in tune with the Orginal works by SM. Please keep writing!

Well that's the end. Loved it all. I see from the information on your details that you haven't written any thing for years, hope you do so soon. Bye bye xxx