Nicely written.

Nicely done, I think you've captured Orihime again

Every facet lit, every aspect addressed, simple, sweet, and amusingly subtle.. very Inoue.

The controlled meanderings of the prose where a plesure to follow, as where the sudden flares of determination, and childlike resolutions.. touching too, and so telling of Inoue and the dynamics of her world.

An artist's ending, resonant and shaded to perfection..

Once again a pleasure to answer one of ur alerts :)

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:D Aw...I like things with Sora in them!

But this was perfect!