You did wonderful in filling in a missing scene from LWW. It should be under spiritual, in my opinion, though.

-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.

Yet another spectacular story from you! This was awesome! I love Tumnus to death, and I love reading about his reconciliation with Edmund.

I hope you will continue to write more stories about Tumnus, because they're so good! I'll be keeping my eyes open!

O how lovely! that was beautifully written and very very profound. Thank you for the reminder. :)

This was short, but it accomplished all that it needed to. The last paragraph is by far the best part of this little writing- good job.

Mm, you had some definite religious overtones in those last few sentences, but kept it in character, which is difficult to do. Some people veer off their plots and characterizations just to make theological points. I'm glad you didn't - I can see how Edmund would want to make sure he still feels a little bit unworthy, to keep himself from falling yet again. This is short but solid, a well-rounded little scene. Nicely done.