Such a sweet story :)

Thanks for putting it up!

That was great! You deserve more reviews. ;-;

"Miguel had his greatest adventure in his arms, and Tulio had his most valuable piece of gold in his." This line was so adorable :3 I really enjoyed this story because of how well you described Miguel's and Tulio's relationship with each other. I also loved the spanish phrases and lullaby you put in there. Great work!:D

Hey, I am going to fave and read later b/c I'm multitasking at the moment and mostly writing a Zelda story, but this looks like it will be an awesome read so I'm looking forward!

~Tris

That was GREAT! What do you mean "not as good as mine", your story was excellent! I loved it ! But then I'm a sucker for lots and lots of drama, near death experiences and emotional scenes. So you did great in my opinion!