That was amazing. I usually *hate* character deaths when they are main characters, but **WOW**, the way you wrote that was just awesome. Tearjerker for sure!

Wow, very unique and beautifully written fic! I love your style of writing, and how you convey such emotion with it. Excellent work! :)

OMG this is extremly sad! But I didn't really understand at times who was talking so If you care to explain, did anyone die and who?

Wow I'm a bit choked up right now, this was really well-written and you are now officially on my favourite authors list! I loved it.

Once again- WOW - EXCELLENT JOB! I just added u 2 my favorite author's list-Keep up the great job!

you really do a great job with Ziva's voice/point of view

with all the characters, really

but her in particular

wow. that was so moving! i like choked up! wow. great job! :)

This is one of the most amazing fanfics I have ever read, which is saying a lot because I don't usually like fanfics. It showed the emotional, unspoken bond between Tony and Ziva that we see on TV, but also the side that we can infer from the show. I hope you keep writing these kind of fanfics because you are an amazing writer

ok... written really well, but kinda confusing.

A great story. Very good.

Wow!

That was intense. I've been looking for a NCIS ff like that. One that wasn't all fluff and Tiva-Babies but just good-old suspence and dark angst. I love it! Really, really well written.

The storyline is a bit hazy in my head and I can't really figure out how this all connects, but that's perfect because that helps set the scene and the atmosphere is just wonderfully transported.

keep writing, I'll be looking out for it!

Gruß

Maggi

...Oh, you are good. Dang you are good. That one made me cry too. I had to bail again to avoid drawing un-wonted attention.

Far out. I dont even want to speak that was so good. Your writing style is so unique, but it works so, so well. Ouch. damn, that was so good. I could say that over and over, and still not convey to you just how damned brilliant that was.

it takes a fair bit to reduce me to this state of wordlessness.

Absolutely brilliant work. Brilliant.

Love Bundi

Wow... That was amazing, one of the best fanfics out there.

And believe me good fanfics are few and far between.

This is just what a Tiva story should be like.

Good Job.

That was beautiful.

The writing was so subtle, you didn't need to go blunt to convey what nneded to be said.

This is probably the best FanFiction I've ever read.

You are most talented.

And I am very, very jealous. ]

x

Georgina.

Dark and beautiful. I can hardly breathe.