You've given me chills. I am still shaking. And i would like to apologize for not reviewing or reading your story sooner. It was excelent (sp?). It's interesting how the weather had effected the Dragon of Earth. Very interesting. If you don't mind i would like to add a refrence of your character in my story later on. MUCH later on. Naturally you would be given the credit deserved and a nice little on the characters name. This is new. :D I would also very much like you to beta read my stories. Lord know's i need it. It would help me out so much. I have added chapter two so when you get the chance please read and review . ehh um if you have ever watched the JLU (justice League Unlimited) please TRY and read the story i have for that and my harry potter FF. :D Thank you soo much.

with all my creativity,

I am a Dinosuar ROAR

That was an interesting oneshot... I assume you created those dragons as the ones who came just before Omi, Clay, Rai, and Kim? It's always interesting to see what people come up with for the personalities of each of the dragons.

You're right, too... Fung is awfully ignored in this fandom. How old is he in this story, did you say?

Anyways, it was a good story. Hope I get to read something more from you in the future!

best of luck with your writing,

~avearia

WOW, I absolutely LOVED THIS! I thought it was VERY well written and the whole idea/concept behind the story was great! Very deep and emotional, and the description was amazing too! Poor Master Fung... *sniffle*

I look forward to more XS fanfics by you! Keep on writing. :D

xxFireWarriorxx

PS: Not any grammar/sp errors that I caught... the whole story was too engrossing... lol!