I hope you continue or finish this story it's really good

Well finishing this story I must say I loved it. It was very well written. My only problems where some unfinished/ forgotten plot lines like the fact that we never really got a reason as to why Serena got better after the spores. Edmunds relationship with that one girl whose name started with a b and a few other small things like time continuities. Other all though for the most parts the characters were well written and compelling great job and great fic.

Oh my gosh sooo happy this finally seemed to resolve itself.

Oh my gosh noo what is happening. Ugh I'm so frustrated I need answer.

Hmmm kind of an foreboding feeling at the end of this chapter

I loved seeing Serena acting like a princess being all diplomatic. It was also funny to see half the stuff Susan said really just relating to Edmund good chapter

Omg nooo why would you do a cliff hanger like that?

I felt like this chapter really stayed true to edmunds character. Great job

Oh my gosh. I can not believe he did that. Edmund what the hell. I'm so disappointed

Loved this chapter. I think that what happened between them was so good for their relationship. Feeling safe and comfortable enough to cry with someone is not just intimate but also showing that she trusts and cares about him. Honestly such a good chapter well written and tasteful

Gross no she can't get married

Wow the don't be a Nancy line was hilarious and the last line killed me. It just left such a sense of longing that Edmund has to was so perfect. Such a nice way to end the chapter well done

Oh my god. This chapter honestly freaking wreaked me. Wreaked me so so so so so bad. HOLEY cow

Omg I knew she was poisoned. Why don't they just get like Lucy's cordial that heals anything?

Oh man I hope that she wasn't poisoned! Though that seemed like the most logical conclusion