Hello World

This is wonderful! It's been an obscenely long time since I read the Leven Thumps books, so some of the Foo terminology is a little hazy... I need to reread it...

I like it, but where's Winter during all ths?

This is god! like my 2 favorite books in 1 burritto!

hey that is good i like that you are a greeat writer. well i guess its funny how i like both leven thumps and harry potter

*this review is for the whole story overall*

I'm going to be as truthfull as I can when I give this review. Your story stinks...just kidding. ;)

But seriously, the way you wrote the final chapters of this story makes me think that you were in a rush to finish the story. I don't blame you for this, but detail is seemed to be forsaken and the storyline is just thrown in. No offense, of course.

The beginning of the story as a whole was a GREAT concept, and I really liked the idea of a Harry/Leven crossover. Unfortunately at the end it just appears as though it's a different author, trying to finish ASAP for a school assignment or something. I know you were gone a while, so I'm not mad or anything.

Perhaps the biggest dissapointment of all about this story was that Voldy didn't meet a tragic demise out of eating "You be the gum!" C'MON! I mean, EVERYONE wanted to see that! You have ultimately betrayed WrightKataang and his brilliant ideas. ;)

Till we meet again,

~TG~

What? I thought you couldn't kill people in Foo! Even WITH magic! You better have a good explanation for this, Gala...

I DO like how you made Harry and Voldy talk in more casual voices, like non-british teenaged Americans. ;) Perhaps it's their sycophants that make them more relaxed to talk like that. ;)

~TG~

Woah, good job on finishing this story. You posted the last two chapters on the same day!

You wrapped the story up quite nicely. Harry vs Dragon Voldemort was pretty cool. But the epilogue... Ralk going back with Harry to reality, that's genius!

Great story. Are you considering writing a sequel? Alas, I couldn't spot the pun.

Very funny, who would've thought you could mix Harry Potter with Leven Thumps? I'm totally wowed. That is a great idea. Keep up the good work!

This is an awsome story! You have done well young jedi (I don't know why I said that). But you are doing great! This is one of the better quality stories that I've seen.

-drops pitchfork-oh you were workin on that other one, i forgives ya!_i love this! please update soon!

ah thats a short chap. i dont know what a 'leven' is hehe. gomenasai. but just wanted to read this story... vewy vewy interesting.. *prods* ep. o.O strange. worth reading. cool! ja ja .

this is awsome no matter are awsome if you write about you do a good job too so...you include my name in the next chapter author STORY DUDE!

_yay! thats a really really good fanfic!im gonna put it on my favs and alert list..cause i wanna read it all!XD

Nice... Very Nice... Super Nice...

I loved the reference to my story. Professor Kringle all the way! Teengamer told me, so I just had to mention it. Maybe I'll return the favor sometime? (If I do it will be in a grand fashion)

It was a short chapter, but I don't see how you could of made it longer without introducing Harry to Leven and letting the madness begin... So quite honestly, I'm okay with the short chapter.

Next! Clover, my favorite character, finally made an appearance. I'd still like to see some more Harry Potter characters.

Also, what's Voldemort doing? I would like to know!

~WrightKataang

P.S. Add Tarcil, my brother, to your favorite authors!