| Reviews for Hotel Evil |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 11/17/2015 Was that a Lithiumshipping moment?! |
| a random reader chapter 4 . 5/29/2011 bwahahaha, nice, verrry nice. i laugh non-stop because of this story, c'mon, what the hell happen next? update the story, pleaseee. . . |
| blackbrakes chapter 4 . 5/4/2010 cute and funny-but can ya please do another chp? I check this story every day, and never see a new chp, andit brings me down! |
| Roxanna chapter 4 . 1/29/2010 Wow...I don't usually read this stuff but I found out I really liked it! Sweet, that was awesome...I think I'll write something like that too! ... Update please? |
 aganstshiper chapter 4 . 4/29/2009 eww safire and silver : nonnonojonononon oops there is a "j" in there good story can't wait for next chapie |
| aganstshiper chapter 3 . 4/29/2009 aww cute little silver |
| aganstshiper chapter 2 . 4/29/2009 wouhou i'm a cat wierd idea cuting of the banisters hehe sneaky silver and blue (cute couple ) |
| aganstshiper chapter 1 . 4/29/2009 saffire is mean can't wait to read next chapter |
| Katsugi chapter 2 . 12/29/2008 hm...Not bad, not bad at all. The characters still have their little quarks and the grammar isn't horrible! Good job! *I mean this as a complement, I am sorry if I sound sarcastic. That's not my objective. There were two instances of puncational errors that I could report: ”No the worst around,” Silver glared at Sapphire then pointed to the three corridors respectively. “Toxic Waste Dump, Broken, Needs Maintenance. Everything here is broken or dead.” "No, the worse around,"- There is supposed to be a comma after "no" because it's an intro word, that is not part of the next fragment/statement. ”Crazy innocent Yellow had to pick me out of all people. Why me?” "Crazy, innocent Yellow..." Comma rule! When there are two adjectives in front of a noun, you separate the first and the second one with a comma! This is to empathize that these are two separate concepts being merged into one. |
| EchanHeartSaitoHajime chapter 4 . 12/7/2008 Please write some more! I cannot stand the suspense! actually, i just wanna read more... |
| RubyxSapphire chapter 4 . 11/12/2008 Um, i really like your story and i am a franticshipper (hence RubyxSapphire)...the pairing SapphirexSilver is called lithiumshipping. not trying to be mean...i really don't like to be mean. ~RubyxSapphire~ ~nya |
| Pikachu247 chapter 4 . 8/22/2008 Why the hell does everyone enjoy torturing the boys? Oh well, I laughed alot, and this story needs to be updated soon! Keep it up! ~Pikachu247 |
| theluckyshipper chapter 4 . 8/3/2008 go Luckyshipping...? |
| mayouh101 chapter 4 . 8/1/2008 um, i'm guessing sign-this-please-shipping is... (drum roll) Gold and Berlitz! am i right? great chap! FEAR THE WRATH OF DOCTOR BLUE! Anyway, Silver treated like a king? Nice... UPDATE SOON! |
| nuudlemonsterheartAxL chapter 4 . 7/31/2008 I...just...can't...stop...laughing! Now that was REALLY funny, and you put in a line of LuckyShipping too! Just one little, itty, bitty problem: you spelt "relived" wrongly. Other than that... SUPERB! I love it! |
