i really like the idea that this was all from Riven's pov .Afterall we dont often get to enjoy Riven's thoughts. Also i like the plot.

What the hell? Riven would NEVER leave Musa behind, he would think of her

What the hell? Riven would NEVER leave Musa behind like that, he would think of her, cause he loves her

I loved this. I always like to think about the Specialist's reaction to the Fairies (not just the Winx's) transformations. I really enjoyed this piece a lot. It was a great insight to Riven's mind (which I always enjoy anyway) and it was well written!

That was goooooooood! Seriously I really liked the last part of it.

Ohhhhh this was adorable! (not sure if that was the right word to put it XD) well written and creative. I really liked it!

please update soon it's an really awesome story

This is one of my favourite stories out of all. It's just so perfect and cute. I love how you keep it so simple and yet so detailed and interesting. When they kiss, it's just great how you add their personalities into their kisses and conversarion as well. Beautiful, 100 out of 5 stars. If I could, I would favourite this story a hundred times. Keep it up! 3

Hey it was a great chapter, and Riven isn't that OOC, really and is of course, a lot of fun to write. I love Bloom bashing, but I would have gone easy on the constant 'my' Musa thing, it feels like she is his property or something. The sarcasm of Riven you have hit on the head with a nail (it's good) and also I was laughing and really enjoying myself while reading this. Thank you.

You are the best Winx Club author! I would love to see the next installment for this (or anything else ;) I don't mind.)

Keep it up!

Nicely done Z,

I love these little random musa/ riven chaps, i'd still like to see one where they actually go on a date... Here 's to hoping you do that for the next chap!

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Nice job with this so far! I see you haven't updated in like 2 years though.. I truly hope you do soon! The story is too good.. And I really want to know what ends up happening with him and the "Elites.." Keep up the great work(:

Aww! Riven's reaction was so cute and hillarious! AW!

Aw! This chapter is SOO adorable! I LOVE a jealous Riven:D I LOVED IT!xD

You captured the feel of the series so perfectly, and more maturely too. I love how you wrote Riven's inner thoughts, they're really insightful and his sarcasm is infectious. Great read. Keep up the great work.