| Reviews for Unforgiving |
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   SheWolfMedjai chapter 4 . 7/21 Seriously this is written so poorly. Grammar is bad and they do not even resemble Raven (dark mystic) and Slade (criminal mastermind). I know fanfic right but seriously at least make it some what believable to the original characters behaviors. And M rated.. Honey this is K. |
| altair chapter 2 . 1/27/2017 so romantic i love this chapter i ve read this a bizzilion times |
| altair chapter 7 . 1/27/2017 i want slade to take back what he said about raven . p.s. kill crapin red x kill him nice chapter ember |
| Anonymous chapter 7 . 10/15/2016 Maybe RedX tries to get with Raven and then robin takes out RedX and tries to knock Slade but Raven intervenes and goes back to slade! Or something like that. |
| Ruby killer chapter 7 . 7/2/2016 I kinda want raven to defend her self with out giving away slade but kinda he a secert from the tiatins that she in a relation ship |
| Nicole chapter 6 . 4/6/2015 I loved this story, you should really continue it. This is one of the only raven and slade stories i love |
| jazibing chapter 7 . 10/3/2014 OMG! I love this story! Please write more! Or I will DIE! |
| bbraerae4ever chapter 7 . 8/12/2014 This is a REALLY good story! The only thing that would make it better would be a RavenxSlade Lemon! Are you planning on making a lemon? And I think Slade should do some of that martial arts stuff where you grab the wrist of someone behind you and flip him over your shoulder. And he knocks Red X out and then all the teen Titans with a secret move that'll keep them knocked out for three days (except Raven, of Course), and then he rescues Raven and takes her to his house and then the lemon. All in the same chapter. |
| Soundiskey2345 chapter 7 . 6/3/2014 I want them to live i meani know it's late and all but please...I just read it and it was amazing. |
| chade.bibbins chapter 7 . 2/19/2014 really really good, please continue if possible. |
| XxMetztlixX chapter 7 . 12/20/2013 WAT |
| bibble chapter 4 . 8/19/2013 thanks for the awesome entertaintment dude, you rock! keep writing more articles! |
| MySillyPresentRevise chapter 7 . 7/26/2013 I want Slade to be lying and for him to actually be In love with Raven. Sorry but I want the happily ever after fairy tale ending but of course with lots more drama. No main characters dying please. Btw just wanted to say my Thanks to you for coming up with such a wonderful story and I do hope you continue writing. :D |
| HellVampAlice45 chapter 6 . 2/19/2013 i think i just died at the ending..it was sooo good...lol *cries tears of joy* |
| PLLML chapter 7 . 2/10/2013 NOOOOOOO! Save them! please lol i love this couple! "gets on knees and clasps hands togther begging" I need more lol 3 |
