Reviews for Shaman King
YukiYuu48 chapter 35 . 7/16
I can't believe you updated a day before my birthday! What a great gift!
Sooo in the beginning of the chapter, at first I was like oh damn, you skip some arcs and fighting. Then, when I read further, I was like since when Kagome joined Hao's team and betrayed Yoh's feelings? As I kept going, my mind popped up and thinking, ohhh that was the other universe. Oh man, sometimes you want us to screw us our mind, lmao.
I actually liked the part where Shippo said to Yoh that Ban is a big meanie made me think of him and the orginal Kagome where he said the same thing to Inuyasha XD Annnd Shippo starting to remember Sango and Kirara (I wonder if he remembers Miroku or any Inuyasha characters). I'm hoping his memories reveals the next couple chapters. It looks like Sessohmaru is giving responsibility to Yoh for Kagome's sake and I'm like oooh, this gets more interesting. Good luck for that!
Awww, there's more YohxKagome moment. Honestly, I feel like they've missed each other soo much that they can't hold on their feelings. I wonder who's gonna confess in the future? Hmmm, I'm hoping Yoh, lol.
Anyway, you did a wonderful job with this story and it looks like you know how to plan out your timeline, which is terrific! I think you'll be done with the story soon!
For the title, I agree it's bland but coming up with the new name can be a real challenging, especially with the theme. As I looked through your poll, it's very complicated to choose so I would say just update the chapters a little bit more then we'll come up with the title. I'm hoping if that makes sense to you.
Please keep updating on what you're doing because I love this story soooo much and I think others would really want to see how's the story ends.
Fuschiaheart chapter 34 . 6/23
I love this story! I've been looking forward to every update and even re read it at times xD but to choose between ren and yoh for kagome is so difficult
YukiYuu48 chapter 34 . 6/22
This chapter was intense! I've seen you added both RenxKag and HaoxKag in one chapter!
I actually love Jun and Sango spied on Ren just because of the cuteness of course! Miroku and Kagome's fight scene was not bad, I get that when you had to describe the action, it becomes complicated compare to what you see in the anime (especially for shonen).
And oh my, when Hao arrived, Yoh, Ren, and Ban literally jumped for Kagome's sake. Of course, it Harem which I'm not a big fan of but this keeps me entertained. I actually felt bad for Yoh because he seems like he saw the scene somewhere (I honestly can't remember which chapter it is) which made him feel sick. I bet he's gonna feel sad again because of Kagome left him basically.
I'm wondering what's going on between Hao and Kagome. Do they have some kind of connection or know each other in their past lives? I'm curious about that for the next chapter.

For the revamp chapters, I noticed you changed some scenes and switched the words around. I'm gonna be honest with you is that the updated version was sooo much better and mature than the first time I've read this back in high school.

Ok, I'm gonna answer your conclusion questions:
What you think of the story so far- Honestly, it was a phenomenal story! I've never seen anyone who blends in 2 shows for one story which most authors never have done like this. Esspecially for Shaman King crossover, this is the best one I've seen it so far. I actually love it when you stick to the original sources so that you want to stay true for this story.

Your plot predictions- I honestly don't know but I have to say for 2 things:
1. I bet Kagome will end up choosing Yoh because I feel like their relationship is a lot closer and tends to have more feelings for each other. Also, both have the same vision about the future, I am hoping that they share the same dream in the future chapters. I could see that Yoh and Anna will no longer be together at some point. Hopefully, Anna takes time to understand Yoh's feelings toward Kagome.
2. I'm not sure if this prediction or not but I feel that Inuyasha's timelines exist in SK because I could see Shippo remembers his past lives with Kagome. Maybe that's why he sees this Kagome reminds him of her. I'm assuming the Inuyasha characters were reincarnated. Also, I think the Sacred Jewel exist since Yoh and Anna sees the same vision about Kagome on the well.

Your favorite Kagome ship and why- Uhh, well I'm stuck between YohxKag and RenxKag for some reason. I think both of them are great pairings. Honestly, YohxKag is just cute where you see they're attaching together (even though they're "best" friends) while RenxKag is like KagxInuyasha where you see the love-hate relationships.

Who is best boy and why- Can I say Yoh because he's adorable when he smiles lol especially when he's being lazy.

Who is best girl and why- I'm gonna have to go with Sango because she is awesome and has great character development in SK.

Wow, that's a super long review and I hope you're safe in your city. Looking forward to your next chapter and of course, your revamp chapters.
Crystal Tsuki Tenshi chapter 34 . 6/22
What you think of the story so far: Um? AMAZING? this is the most in depth crossover fic i think I've ever read for IY/SK and I gotta tell you-it SHOWS! You put so much attention to detail in everything and it really feels like you could SEE these scenes in an anime you know? I really loved this chapter a lot-Miroku's shenanigans made me giggle and even more when everyone was immediately ready to kill him for it and I love that Kagomes looking out for Shippo! My heart! AAAAH this story is so good

Your plot predictions: I don't even know! At this point it's really hard to say who Kagome is going to end up with but I do still have my suspicions on Yoh/Kag since Anna and Yoh aren't together anymore I guess. Not to mention Kagome returns his love.

Your favorite Kagome ship and why~: Ren/Kagome is still super sweet to me...he just cares about her happiness so much even if it isn't with him. He doesn't consider himself worthy of her but still does everything in his power to keep her shining in the light. She planted a sunflower in his heart and it follows her like the sun.

Who is best boy and why?: REN FOR THE REASON ABOVE.

Who is best girl and why?: Best girl is Sango cuz she just is.
teacosies chapter 34 . 6/22
I released such a loud laugh when Ren's nosy family wound up watching them from the bushes. They're so hilariously supportive of him and I'm all for it. I wonder what he was going to say to Kagome just before Miroku arrived? That entire meeting was also a bounty of entertainment. I'm amused that Kagome has such a cheer/defense squad for her fights. I wasn't expecting the Hao/Kagome scene near the end, but it's a pleasant surprise. You managed to squish in two of my top picks for her in this. I've enjoyed this chapter dearly.

I also wasn't aware that you were doing an active revamp of the older chapters! I'll keep an eye on that when I decide to do a reread. This was such a great chapter, though, so thank you very much for treating us so well.
Guest chapter 33 . 6/14
Thank you for updating in the middle of all the madness; this has been such an amazing story to follow and every update fills my heart with joy. I'm usually not the biggest fan of harem tropes since my heart does vote for a winner (and I must admit it's leaning towards our cute tsundere underdog here) but I do find myself amused by their very messy love lives. It's a nice reprieve from everything. Anyway, hope you and yours are also doing well and taking care in these times.
YukiYuu48 chapter 32 . 6/14
(Again, I pressed the "Post" button, *rolls eyes*. I swear, why can't they have an edit button? God damn it, FF)
Continued from Chapter 33:
That friendship moment was beautiful! Sharing their past memories with each other and that makes their bonds even close!
Oh my, Ban and Jak transferred to their school? Oh god, I feel like Ban is following Kagome around lol. I actually like Ban interacting with Anna because I find out was funny especially with the nicknames.
For the table scene, I'm gonna be honest that there are so many dramatic things going on, especially with the engagement for KagxRen. Now everyone knows about it lol!
Anyway, thank you so much for uploading this! Now, I can't for the next chapter including the Shaman Fight!
YukiYuu48 chapter 33 . 6/14
OMG, I'm so glad you update this chapter! I was thinking about your fanfic while I heard that they're going to make Shaman King reboot. I've been waiting for this for a few years and it's finally happening! Another good news is that we also have Inuyasha Sequal coming up in the Fall, so that makes two from this year! I'm glad everything is ok for you and I know a lot of things had happened in the US (especially with the corona and protest) but what can we do.
This chapter was a rollercoaster and lay back chapter! I love you've put more details and characters in it cause we all need fluffy moments. It looks like at the beginning where Kagome had the same vision as Yoh and Anna's. I'm still wondering if she falls down the well at the Federal Era and transport to their Universe? (Similar to what I said a few chapters ago) AND MORE YOHXKAG MOMENTS! It looks like Yoh is trying to figure out what he did wrong to Kagome while she was sleeping. I actually love the scene where Yoh hugged Kagome, I find out was really cute! I think it the best one I've seen so far.
Kenzkitty chapter 33 . 6/14
i know I went on to a site called myanimelist and saw that they were going to make a reboot and I was so shocked and super excited about it! I just can't wait to watch when it comes out!
teacosies chapter 1 . 6/14
Dude the knews of a Shaman King reboot reactivated a feral part of my brain and I went searching for an Inuyasha crossover. I'm seriously amazed by this story and I just read the entirety of this in one sitting
I should have gone to bed like, 2 houra ago, but it was impossible to STOP
I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this! So far one of my most favorite SK/IY fics yet!
Crystal Tsuki Tenshi chapter 33 . 6/14
I was shocked and thrilled to see this update! I heard about the shaman king update too and it made me think of this story immediate TBH so this fic updating was like icing on the cake
It's good to know you're doing well Sakuma-sama! You came back with such a blast too...this chapter is so BIG and filled with so much content! I think I read it took fast so I should probably go back and reread it for any stuff I missed just in case but gosh I was soooo excited! There is so much happening in Kagome's memories and it makes me so curious
And Older Kagome is now being visited by Bankotsu? Whaaaat? Look at him taking the chance to get favors X) thats so funny! I wasn't expecting him and Jankotsu to transfer in their high school I actually thought it was going to be the Tao's when I read the part about them getting transfers! Their school life sounds so lively hehehe now all we're missing is Renny and Big Sis Jun and the set is complete! (Well..except for Ryu I guess but he seems very old so)
Bankotsu and Ren is so funny to me but they are like my favorite bromance and I'm so happy that they get to be proper friends here outside of your oneshots! And you brought up the engagement omg now EVERYONE knows! That's so funny and cute and I love that Kagome doesn't deny it even if she says it's embarrassing she's not taking it back! There is hope and a fighting chance for you Renny~
I'm really glad again that you're doing ok and I hope you stay safe~! This fic brightens up my life in these sad times!
AAAAAAAAAA chapter 33 . 6/14
i am IN LOVE with this fic. desperately in love with your writing, you magical human
p.s: i am excited for the reboot too!
anon chapter 33 . 6/14
oh what? i was literally just reading the previous chapter when i found out there was suddenly a "Next" button omg. kagome's past is only being more mysterious than ever! i rly love this world you made and i'm so intrigued about where it's going to lead. i can't say i mind the downtime after so much drama and i really find it sweet how kagome and jun are looking out for pirika and her love!

bankotsu thinking manta's the threat is so funny to me lol. then it turns out to be kagome's fiance hahahaha! i am sure that yohkag is going to be endgame here based off of their past and the fact that kagome's heart already seems to be in yoh's grasp but a woman can still dream of renkag right? don't mind me i'll just be here in my fantasies

glad to know you're still good and kicking, op! this has to be one of the best shaman king crossover fics here and i'm excited to discover how you're planning to do it
Guest chapter 33 . 6/14
I'M SO GLAD TO KNOW THAT YOU'RE DOING FINE MISS AUTHOR! I was already excited when I heard about the Shaman King reboot and I was actually thinking of this fic when I saw the news! I got SO surprised when you updated but it is a good surprise! You always spoil us so much with quality content and its so LONG this time too so thank you! I was surprised that it was the Kotsus that transferred to Kagome's school and not the Tao's but this is good too and I really liked that twist lolol!
I really find it funny that Kagome and Ren's "engagement" keeps getting brought up XD it's my fave! Their all such a big family... good stuff!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/8
Manga Hao is an incredible character. He’d fit well with Kagome... Yoh is jut meh, compared to Hao.
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