love it. i would love to read more..

Pls update soon

So i'm guessing xander is Dean's but he just looks like Sam? Like how Jamie lookies like Luke? Can't wait for an update! And also for your other stories your starting or talking about starting. I love SPN/OTH!

I just started reading this story and I have to say I love, love, love it. Are you going to be updating any more chapters?

just wanted to let you know something

Durch den Monsun is correctly translated 'through the monsoon'

but your rough translation is okay too

sorry your writing is good but i am not going to read the story;-)

keep writing though

I like this.

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

PLZ UPDATE SOON.

LOVE the flashback. LOL. It was fun.

And AWESOME interaction between Sam, Haley, and Delilah. I just love them.

And how cute was it that Dean took her side?

Can't wait for the scene about Rachel.

Excellent Job

HAHA I loved this chaptet and i love this story. Even though i am more of a Daley fan i still LOVE Saley. Anyway i love the last little bit, when they were all acting like best friends again :P Update soon!

Yay! You updated...Im hoping since you're updating it means you've been struck by inspiration and will have more for me to beta soon :)

Loved this chapter the first time I read it and I still adore it now...Jealous Haley, Cocky Sam, Playful Dean..Delightful delilah all of it rocked. And the flashback was great.

this was a cute chapter. wow delilah is a very clever 5 year old. hehe. And dean on his way to. thank god he had haley's back. i guess he has a very protective side of haley.

Hello girl!

Where are you been?

Even when Im a huge Daley fan I miss this Saley fic so much.

I really hope you can update soon.

Take care.

Love.

Nallely

I have mixed feelings about Haley keeping Delilah a secret from Sam. Both telling him and not could be construed as brave or cowardly. If she had told Sam she had help (since I believe he would have embraced fatherhood) both financial and emotional. Not telling him had to be hard since even though she had her friends, her family... she was essentially a single parent. Which is hard, I consider it strong of her to not to want Sam back only for a child but... I don't know. I flip flop on this so much. LOL. I rambled a bit so I probably don't make sense.

I think it's totally cool that when they fought Dean would pull Haley away, LOL... she kicks so much as*.

I love the both flashbacks. I can totally picture the first one and in the second one Brooke sounds totally cute.

I think it's awesome that Sam was holding Haley back, lol.

Fabulous Chapter!

Aww that Saley moment was awesome! Dean's like a big brother to Haley isn't he well in the flashback. can't wait for your next update! This was so good!

The first flashback was love...I could imagine Haley holding her little girl and thinking all those thoughts and it made me a little weepy.

Loved how awkward the car ride seems, and this line

'She used to have dreams similar to this, only in her dreams he wasn’t mad at her for keeping Delilah from him and they were happy together'

Owns me.

Second flashback was great...Dean turning down the cheerleaders and Sam tightening his grip on Hlaey so Theresa didnt get bitch slapped also love Brooke! Peyton rocks too...But Brooke was awesome!

This chapter was so sweet and touching! i wanted to kill that stupid nurse! Slut! Lol! Good job and man he was so close to kiss her! Damn it!