It's really quite amusing how people can *hear* the capitalization in Gai's speech. XD Nice to see Naruto is making friends. Hope he is able to actually keep them. He needs some childhood happiness.

I, for one, like Quartermaster. If only because I hope his vegetable line ends up a running joke. I can imagine people giving Naruto a good ribbing over it years down the road.
Good job balancing humor and the tension of having the unwanted jailer at headquarters.

As it stands, I get the distinct feeling that Squad 14 is more in likely gonna try to get Naruto back into the ANBU headquarters. As it stands, a few of them Raidou, Genma and Kakashi in particular have definitely grown rather fond of him.

I literally JUST realized this is pre-Uchiha massacre. Wow.

While I can't remember for the life of me what the fic was called, it did feature the Konoha 12 (more or less) something finding themselves in the real world. Probably the most terrifying/humorous part of the fic was when doctors from the real world decided to give them a psychology examination. Suffice to say that almost all of them would've qualified for a mental asylum many times over. Especially Kakashi, Sasuke and Neji. Funny enough I'm pretty sure the fic mentioned that the most emotionally stable one was Kiba of all people. Saying that aside from being a tad bit too impulsive he was emotionally sound.

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Bless Gai.

I just want Naruto to have friendssssssss

I hope nothing bad happens at the academy...

I'm really excited to read your story, an I just had to tell you. I might have read it before, but I don't think so. Regardless, I just had to pay you a compliment. The first paragraph is lovely, but the sentence that just really grabbed me, and I just thought was so.. I don't know.. just FANTASTIC and beautifully described, and just painted a fabulous picture of was: "A tall man slid into the room, moving as if neither gravity's decree nor the limitations of joints and bones applied to him." KYA! It was so.. like.. LITERARY! IMPRESSIVE! Like... PROFESSIONAL! REALLY! Sorry, I just had to gush to you for a sec. So far, the whole story (ok the chapter I've read) has been really great, but that one sentence just really affected me. It captured me! I'm sorry if it seems silly to gush over one sentence, but I can't help it. Looking forward to the rest of your story!

this is good

FUCK the Hokage.

That smug bastard, Fugaku! Ugh!

Awww... Loved that small moment they had! XD

Omg! Tension~! XD