Very interesting plot. Hope you update soon(~**)~

Good handling of the sexy sexy and controlling the... well, control. I hope you pick this story back up and finish it.

Great cliffhanger x) Are you still active? I would like to read more! Please continue :D

That was a roller coaster ride. First off, the story has nice plot, it has a nice 'pace' to it. A bit rushed i might say, But sometimes we need to rush things. There were gradual improvements with the writing over the chapters so that was nice. But i have noticed something, you have to be more articulate with your words. Be more concise. Like in the love scene in this chapter, it went from left to right and then up and further up and then down. Check your grammar. Check your spelling. If you are not sure about the spelling l, you can always refer to a dictionary.
But here is the important part, me likey your story. :) update soon :)

Creo que dijiste el domingo, pero no un domingo después del año,

where's the next chapter.

Prometiste actualizar pronto y ya han pasado 4 meses y seguimos esperando porfavor actualiza

Where is the next chapter? Please update :(

That was exciting :) Update please. can't wait

update more

Amazing! :D

Oh god! What a scene now I need a cold shower ;p it's good to finally have you back!

hahaha nice! :D good to have u back

this is good but then the question is when is the next update...probably by next year. your not known in updating regularly :-) still thanks for the update.

you could make us happier if you will not make us wait too long :-) and i also like the way their relationship flourish into something romantically and i also love sei antics.

thanks again and good day.

please continue to update! more :