Reviews for The Chronicles of the Fellowship
MasterKogha chapter 6 . 7/4
I really don't get why this was in a 'earth culture shock' fanfic section. This doesn't have any I mean ANY of that. Okay the flashlight was briefly mentioned.
MasterKogha chapter 5 . 7/4
Yeah. Like I'd want a magic ring that spies on me 24/7 and transmits data to it's master. We have enough of that here! (ROFLMAO)
MasterKogha chapter 1 . 7/4
This fic has a lot of decent potential but I feel most reviews on here are bots as they all seem to praise exactly the same with only slightly different wording and Oh Liar handed key elements to the United Nations to make the web more 'fair' in reality we got undermined by mostly Chinese farm bots and some Russian crap thrown in too.

You want a Russian Conclusion? Obama did WAY WAY worse then anything our POTUS could've done even though it's been proven the media lied.
MasterKogha chapter 2 . 7/4
Why did you go strictly script here? There's room for lots of potential here for it to be a good AU as they have abilities and insights to add but your not utilizing.
Anna SB chapter 9 . 2/20
I know this story has been posted for some years now, but I just wanted to emphasize how much I love it. The Narnian and Tolkien universes have always fed my wildest dreams and I'm just glad to find stories that join both. The Chronicles of the Fellowship are particularly well written and I love the interactions between the characters. One of my favorite was Susan threatening Legolas with her arrows as he pointed his at her brothers. Congratulations for the amazing storytelling.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/7
The part where Susan joins the battle at Helm's Deep and Theoden suggests her brothers talk her out of it, but then they both look at each other, and burst out laughing is a nod to one of Andrew Adamson's previous movies, Shrek
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
Dear Michael:

Just thought I should mention: The character's name is Aragorn, son of Arathorn. Aragon is a region in Spain.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth
DianaLupa chapter 2 . 4/13/2019
Hi, I just read the first chapter of your story, and so far I love it!
I’d just like to point out a small continuity error between this and the original story. Susan was supposed to be the Gentle Queen, which you have put in, but I think you based her character a little too much on the PC film, in which she fights. According to the books, Susan tended to stay out of battles whilst Lucy was “as good as any man” (I think those were the words) on the battlefield. I just feel as if the girls’ characters have been swapped in your story.
It’s not a major problem though and in no way stops me from reading! I just thought I’d let you know for any future stories.
Sincerely, and with many thanks for the great work,
DianaLupa.
Guest chapter 31 . 3/8/2019
The part where Lucy is enraged and even throwing a punch at Gollum at Shelob's lair. It counts as Georgie Henley being one of the actors I know who are yelling and screaming. Like Leonardo DiCaprio, Will Smith, Jennifer Lawrence, Tobey Maguire, Christina Ricci, or Hayden Christensen
Guest chapter 7 . 2/13/2019
tHeY'Re tAkInG thE hObbiTS tO iSengArD
Guest chapter 12 . 11/24/2018
I'm glad you didn't have someone else go over the cliff with aragorn I don't believe that one of the penvensies could survive that river or not aragorns a man from a race of super humans while they are just normal people.
Guest chapter 15 . 10/10/2018
This counts as a movie directed by Andrew Adamson, making the Journey to Mount Doom his own way. Also, Tilda Swinton makes a cameo in it, in Edmund's memories. Although, she has no lines, she is still credited
winterqween chapter 31 . 10/6/2018
Holy crap I loved this SO MUCH!
I wish I could double favorite this.
Will be reading again!
DracoShagMe chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
so, i just want to say how utterly BRILLIANT this fic is. i mean, I already read this before but i wasn't able to understand it more clearly because I rushed it due to my bloody homeworks. Thank god I reread this again and im crying! excellent writing!
Aragorn II Elessar chapter 31 . 6/8/2018
Great story. Loved it a lot. The interactions were fun too. And you split up the Pevensie siblings nicely. Lucy had to join Frodo and Sam. Peter and Susan had to be with Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli and Boromir while Edmund had to be abducted along with Merry and Pippin.
The action scenes were nice too. And the ending with Aslan arriving and setting up Prince Caspian was good too. Just one complaint. With Boromir having survived, he should have brought Denethor out of his madness, Then Denethor could have died fighting in the Siege of Gondor or the Battle of the Morannon. Counting that out, this story was great. And I like SuLego so their kiss at the end was fun.
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