This is absolutely stunning. Your writing style is beautiful and tragic. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if something like this actually ends up happening...
Thank you for sharing your work on this site~

Sorry didnt finish beat the earl together and then the innocence starts disappearing and all the akumas start disappearing and everyone sees the souls as they are freed and then mana or allen finally remembers what happened and who he is Allen's body returns to its original form and then everyone sees mamas soul but then a little allen comes down says hi to everyone the he and mana say goodbye and allen brings him up to heaven! That would be so lovely!

Can there be like an epilogue where everyone yes EVERYONE is there and Kanda, Lenalee, Lavi, and Allen with the other excorcusts

This story was amazing, I definitely wasn't expecting anything that happened in this. The plot twist was so well done that I gaped at the screen when I read it.

That plot twist threw me for a loop so hard. Damn. I loved the gritty, realistic details you included here; it really. rings the story and setting alive in the way that the actual anime/manga can't. It /feels/ like an era of war in this, and you wrote it all so well. Awesome story, sorry my review is so incoherent!

Oh gosh. Tragedy. And I most definitely did nOT expect Allen, Mana to be Akuma. Oh my holy lord.

Ooo a very interesting ending. The summary was a bit misleading though; I thought that the fic was going to be more about Lavi and Allen's friendship after the Ark and the fight there.

But still, a well written story!

This is a really interesting idea. I like the dynamic between the characters, as well as their thought processes. Allen dying and Mana taking over his duty is an interesting idea that never crossed my mind.

This is well-written and very intriguing. Keep up the good work

I finished the story with my jaw hanging open, going, "Holy shit... holy effin' shit!"

I scrolled up for the link to the profile page to check out just who the hell you are... and saw 'Aishuu' printed clear under the title. How could I have possibly missed that. Of course. It's you. I just found what is arguably the best -man fic I've ever read, one of the most creative and jaw-dropping take of the story, and naturally it's written by you.

You're a goddamn Einstein of fic writing. I swear one of this days I'm gonna take a more careful look at your profile pages, and maybe your journal, because if you've ever published anything professionally, then dammit, I want to buy it.

In the mean time, I guess this is goodbye to productivity for the next several hours. Damn. Why do you have to write for my current obsession? Like I haven't been procrastinating enough on my own! Your writing is like crack, I swear. I just don't know how to quit reading you. T_T

Oh god. What a beautiful, cruel twist of fate. I definitely did not see that coming! And yet, even while it's slightly AU, there's such a strong interpretation of Allen and Cross.

And you've managed to make me dislike Cross more than I already did. The twisted way he thinks of defeating the Earl is just, well, twisted and sadistic. It's so completely different from what we see of canon Allen's views of saving Akuma that I still wonder how they ever became master and disciple.

Just, wow, beautiful work and awesome interpretation of Akuma, Allen's character and Cross's actions.

uwahh, this is so lovely. i dunno why, but i like it a lot. keep up the awesome work, luv~ :D

o.O

That's pretty much what I was feeling when I reached the end of this.. It's weird.. But in a good way.. And... umm.. (my mind keeps screaming weird at me, no offence meant) Just wow.

You're one of the few who has gotten me speechless.. Good job :D

Holy - Oh my god! That is - that was - OH MY GOD! THAT WAS GREAT! *falls prostrate is awe*

Wow. You wrote about all the characters really well. After the turning point (and after my slow mind figured out what was going on), I actually started to believe your version of events to be true, everything you wrote seems so... possible. Great job!

This is a version (AU) that I never thought of. Congrats on making Allen even more sad; in a good way.

I liked it, enjoyed reading it even. Its very well written with a nice flow to the narrative.