I read this in less then a day. it's really good, like most of your work. I hope you do make a sequal.

P.S. I think that I have said this before, but I'll say it again. When you become a profesional writter please tell me so. I would love to read the books you wrote.

When I was reading this chapter I realized, that you actually succeeded in creating a comic-relieve character (Rasmon. That's great, to be able to create personalities like that, amazing.

Good, I'm going to read it all.

Awesome!:)

i think this is an awsome story. im getting really pulled into it. ive loved every aspect of it so far except i think on chp. 10 Davion should say for the horde instead of im one of you. thats wat i was hoping/expecting

Damn man! It's good to see you updating this. I was sure this thing was abandoned. I'm really looking forward to see how this all works out. Keep up the good work!

Yay me! Nice. Mind control. I like that talent.

I like Trezner too. That Grand Master was obviously an idiot. xD

HEhe Trezner Shadowlit is a Badass no doubt about it! Im glad you brought Rasmon back for me...It makes me feel loved in an unloving world! LOL! shame this fic is coming to an end...this is easily one of the best written stories ive ever read! all the others are always about the damn Blood Elves/Night elves Pairings or about one of Illidan's followers...WE NEED MORE HOrde

Another good chapter! I'm really enjoying the development of the characters and seeing as alliances shift back and forth. Still Ravendolht must be pretty cocky to let the Lycan go...though considering what he did to the Grandmaster I guess he didn't have a choice. :)

I've been watching this for awhile now, and found myself unfortunately too busy to review, but since I had some spare time and saw that you updated, I must say that your work so far has been simply great.

I'm enjoying the level of description that you give the story, and the conflict between Southshore and Tarren Mill is very believable. Referring to what Ravenholdt said, I'm wondering exactly what would bring the Alliance army and the Horde to Northrend in order to fight. Something's telling me it'll be the Lich King, but I'll wait to find out. Another thing that interests me is when Ravenholdt told Rezner that he took some extra steps to make sure that his plan unfolded just right.

I dunno, a bit of speeculation on my part that nobody really needs to read should probably go here, but I'm gonna wait until more of the plot reveals itself until I begin ranting and raving. So, without much more ado,

Be Happy - Python

Very interesting. Ravenholdt must be truly mad or truly have one hell of a plan to ensure that turn of events comes to pass. In the eternal words of Oliver Twist: Please sir, may I have some more?

Hehe Yay Rasmon is back! hope the Horde army smashes Tyranny's Bane...lol very nice chapter but i have 1 question...Can yu find Trezner Shadowlit in Ravenholdt or is he just a made up character? UPDATE SOON!

And yet another cliffhanger ;) Makes me wonder what other 'steps' Lord Ravenholdt would have taken outside Hillsbrad to be sure that the war would move just the way he'd mentioned. I cannot wait for the next installment!

omnomnom. So deliciously written. Of course I can't make a well-rounded review, I'm loving every word of this tale and can find nothing that requires editing. Not necessarily the events (those poor farmers ;_;), but how it's spun out and detailed.

lol ive played on WOW fr nearly 2 years and ive never been to Raveholdt Manor...meh..anyway great chapter mate i really love this story!