"Obi-Wan stands to the side, as he always does, holding something pathetic and hungry." This line really struck a deep chord in me. It draws back to the beginning of the story and renews the ideas of Obi-Wan's unhappiness and feelings of not belonging. It's such a small line, yet it holds such a big meaning.

oh wow that was wonderful. Liked it alot, obi-wan is like that though i though you really kinda captured him.