This was just...WOW i mean dang this was good it almost made me cry KAKAXAYA FOREVER! Beautiful just BEAUTIFUL

I need to stop reading fics like this. I end up depressed for a week. Good job, that's probably what you were going for.

I think that you should wright this in kakashis point of view too! i would love to know what his thoughts were & it would be cool if you made, when he dies (sad thought) and sees her again i think that would be rreally cool but i really like your story, like really like it!

Your story was amazing! It was sad yet beautifully written. Although it would have been nice if they lived on together things like death can occur. Anyways... I really liked it! Good job on it :)

Waw! You're a great writer.. This was so sad and beautiful at the same time..

A poetic and beautiful oneshot. KakaxAya is one of my favorite pairings. The part where Ayame gets hit is a bit confusing though. All over it's very lovely fan fiction.

Aww so sad! T-T I like it all endings are happy ones. Love the pair!XP

Well... That's certainly an unexpected pairing. But I don't see why not. Things don't end in happiness in real life, but maybe that's why so many people seek the happiness they want to find in the land of fantasy. Some are so engrossed that they've forgotten how to make their way back to reality. I find that a pity. Because what they found in fantasy is just a fleeting glimpse of what they could have in reality if only they work hard for it.

Well, enough of my ramblings. I enjoyed reading this. :)