I will never,ever..eeevvvveeeeerrrrrrrrr!Read the last part of this story,the HxK which...right now stands for Hkarux Kyoya,even though it stands for Hikaruxkaoru...so anyway,that didn't suit my taste buds...or yaoi selection, sorry.

The beginning was sexy,and the middle was naughty,but the ending,THE ENDING...WAS BITCHY#awsomesauce

This was amazing. :) I really hope there will be a third installment! I want to find out what happens! :O

I loved it, but u could pronounciate which twin is which

Ok, I'm sorry but...please explain to me what just happened...where did Kaoru go and why is Hikaru makin love to Kyoya?

I know you wrote this quite some time ago, but I've only recently started watching Ouran. I must say that it is probably my absolute favourite. But anyway. Back to your story... I read DSL and now DSS, and I have to say you wrote some amazing smut. I love the twins and my favourite character is Kyoya. I adore that you brought him into the story line. He's hot as hell. ;) And yes, I realise he is fictional. Haha.

Some positive feedback, both DSS and DSL were so hot and I hate sounding like a perv, but totally turned me on. I love yaoi though. And you definitely hit that one right on the head.

Some constructive criticism though, I noticed a few spelling errors/wrong words, (I.e. instead of "That hurt" you typed "That heart.") But nothing that really bothered me. And very little punctuation, but I can look past that and really focus on your plot.

All in all, executed well and I'd love to read some more fanfics by you. You've got a great imagination and a talent for writing. You've won me over. ;]

Lou Lou

Oxoxoxoxoxox

you should have made this story into chapters -_-

u have 2 make da twins gay there're brothers 4 god seak

You drag your sentences on for way too long. There are some there that could be split into two, three, maybe even four different sentences. You also seem to switch from past tense to present sometimes. And don't rush things through - reading about something is supposed to take longer than if you physically did it. And since I read through each scene in a minute or two...

this is a great story

wow...cool...I like 's cool in a sense...

Wah there's trouble in paridise.

Can't wait for DSSe, finish the ending now and stop with the writers block!

I just reviewed my own story how sad!

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Love it! *wags tail* Can't wait for Dirty Sinful Secrets! It's a trilogy!

*GASP* OH NO HE DID NOT! You know...coming to the end of the scene on the beach, I thought to myself, "he slept with someone else" but I didn't expect to be right! Or that it was with Kyouya! Especially NOT on that night when he left poor Kaoru all ALONE!

This ending was GENIUS! It was certainly not how I expected this to end...I did, however, expect that there would be a sequel! YAY! This fic was really really good! So good, that I can't even begin to say why I loved it so much! Your writing is just really awesome! Great job!

Peace Out! _