Uber fluffy!
I EAGERLY ANTICIPATE MY HUG

lol, i loved it. very well done. and are you seriously telling me you're 12?

Cute story! It was a little awkward in some places, but nothing too bad. Overall, great job.

I'd do anything for a hug from the Doctor! I thought your story was pretty cute, but you should probably watch out for oxymorons, you had quite a few (for example "A distant scream sounded nearby", it can't be distant AND nearby. And the bit where the "subtle" footprints were resounding, they have to be one or the other). Just work on that and wordiness/flowery language and you'll probably see a big improvement in your writing, because underneath all that extra stuff you're quite good.

What an earth does lubify mean?

But anyway, that was so sweet and wonderfully fluffy. Loved it! xD

Aww so cute! Amazing! xx

Aw so sweet! I love it!

i LOVED this XD

aww, im all fluffy now! keep up the good work :D

adorable if a little OOC maybe.

Yay fluff! Everyone likes fluff, lol, even if sometimes they don't admit it. But yeah, i thought this whole little scenario was just really cute. Had me smiling from ear to ear. And you write so beautifully as well- i loved your beginning description of the storm.

Now, where's my super ultra mega jumbo awesome hug from the gorgeous Doctor? Eh? lol.

Kudos on the wonderful story!

xx

*gah!*

Sorry, at the moment I can't make a reasonable comment as my ability to form words has vanished beneath pure fluffiness!

Brillian story, love it!

C: lovely fluff. poor Rose, scared of thunder. I used to be, but now i'm just annoyed cos they stop me sleeping!