Ooh wow 2011, it's already 2014...damn time flies by xD
Please continue if you have the time ) It's such a nice story to read.
Don't listen to people nagging about this and that...just have fun while writing and let your imagination do the work 3

Lol, when the hell did Bleach get involved? Not that I particularly mind, bus still, didn't feel like it was needed.

Might I say, even though I didn't get to the end of the chapter, not even past the first paragraph, and I am already bowing at your feet! I have read countless stories where people try to describe the horses in the most elemetary way, and fail miserably!

Yeah, I'm congradulating you on your use of equine vocabulary xD I got a perfect picture!

Well this does have the potential to be a good story, and I can tolerate you giving Altair an OC for a wife. But what I can't handle is the OOCness. You gave Altair a sense of humor, a quality that HE DOES NOT HAVE! I mean seriously he's freaking Altair Ibn La-Ahad, second grandmaster of the order founded by Al Mualim. Writer of the codex pages, conquerer of Cyprus, and without a doubt the greatest philosopher the world has ever know.

do not be disheartened i like this story you need to work on your grammar and post some good chapters before anyone will revie we wait with baited breath for how it is relevent to bleach.

Orabit commends you

I like it! Really! Though I hope you're not going to kill off Altair's unborn child, because if you do... then how do we get Desmond? lol, lots of stuff is going on in this story.

as an add on to my last review one thing you might want to consider is, i never beat the first game but i came close...but then my gamertag got erased... anyways i was playing the new one and it seems altair has a little love interest with a certain templar or possible covert assassin named maria or something like that. if you havent played it yet i think altair has a child with her but never finds out or soemthing anyways after desmond goes through a love scene with her via a freaky dream as altair which could possibly a hallucination due to prolonged animus exposure, altair leave BUT he is stuck with maria which e come to a conclusion which my mind corelates to her being pregnant aka we lead onto into ezios lineage possibly but the pregnancy conclusion i believe is what desmond comes to the ezio part is my own. anyways sorry im rambling but just thought you should know that

discontinue this story? are you f'ing kidding me? this is the best first person story ive ever read?

I really like this story! Please Update

I'm enjoying this story alot please keep writing!

This is great! I can't wait until the next chapters come out! HURRY UP WITH THEM ALREADY!

Awsome story! i really like it! skratch that, i love it! And by the way, you best is always enough. Always. Please keep writing!

Well I hope you redue them fast I await your new ideas but I hope you take the time to breath and you don't burst your brain with all your new ideas yes?

pay no attention to my pen name

(Told ya I'd get around to read your story it just took me a little longer than anticipated)

Poor Altaïr. I hope he can find his mother and that she's still alive.

Great job on this chapter!

~Grimmy