| Reviews for Friendly Interference |
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Durch.Leiden.Freude chapter 1 . 9/24/2009 hahaha. Zutara moments here as well. anyway, toph was so sweet to plan the party! just love how toph ntw, your oneshots rock! |
sTitchEd016 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008 yeah, Aang was a little OOC(i thought it was bcoz of the whole airbenders extinction and stuff) but it was still so sweet of Toph. good job! |
Teal chapter 1 . 5/30/2008 Great story! I agree that Aang was slightly out or character, but Toph was pretty much spot on. I loved the bit about the berry stuffing with Momo; it makes the story come alive and creates a voice to the story. Dialogues are very believable and the storyline is great. The overall feel to the story is wonderful and you should be commended for that; not too 'in your face' but not to vague either. You should write more... ~Teal ps. Happy Belated Birthday :) pps. yay for Aang/Toph too! :D |
Anti-Logic chapter 1 . 5/30/2008 I really like the friendship angle of this, and you're right, seeing Aang in this light is nice. The prank with Zuko and Katara was funny. xD |