beautiful...

I cried at a such short story. Oh. But such a good story. I'm amazed! So little words - so very tuchy
This was published long ago. I was a kid back than and I didn't know Naruto existed. I hope that all those that hoped that Sasuke and Sakura will be together see them now. With Sarada and Sasuke as a sensei. It's sooo cute... I'm so proud of them. Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura. They decirve all the love in the world
You made me emotional with your story. Thught I know you'll never see this... Thank you!

And the child is sarada! The child of everyone's hopes, the dream baby.

"Sakura deserves better, he knows, but he is suddenly quite sure he'll never give her the chance to find it."

Because he is still...

"slowly, surely, painfully remembering how to live"

He lives to protect his family... Still so bitter, but also so sweet.

Beautiful evolution of the confused Dark Avenger into a matured man with eyes wide open at the love and greatness the world has always had to offer. Written years before the manga came to a close, Sasuke's journey is aptly depicted, full to the brim with the emotion it deserves. Thanks for sharing!

the real question is what color are the eyes?

i hope for green

You were right about them having a dark hair child! Kekekeke her name is Sarada. She had gotten her dad's looks.

Sweet! :)

This. Was. Perfection. :')
Every stage of his life was described beautifully -the character development excellent- and the ending was beyond amazing. I like your style of writing - keep at it!

This story is spectacular! Just, loved it! Loved Sasuke's development while he is "slowly, surely, painfully remembering how to live" (That line just twisted my heart)...I just- There aren't enough words to describe the feelings this left me with :')

This was beautiful, and I do hope Sasuke realizes he needs to come home soon so he can have this paradise.

Great job!

So adorable! I love it! :D

So cute!

Wow. Just...WOW. I am utterly, absolutely, wonderfully blown away! Your writing is simply amazing - there's no other way to put it. I wish I could condense all the synonyms of "spectacular" into this one review, but even that wouldn't do this story justice. I love the structure of this fic, as well as your portrayal of Sasuke as someone who is believably "slowly, surely, painfully remembering how to live". Your story left me with a warm, fuzzy, happy feeling in my chest. Thank you so much for putting a big fat goofy grin on my face! :D

Love the fic! XD

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW super cuteeeeeeeeeee