I can just imagine the stunned silence of the class when little Marco finishes that speech. Brilliant.

Aww...Though the teacher must be rather worried, with some of the more..particular things he is say.

I loved this story! You managed to tell a story in the voice of a young kid, something very few people manage. I really liked the vivid images you painted in my head: mainly, the idea of Tony convincing his son that MTAC was a privete cinema just for him.
I would really enjoy a sequel, it could be in the form of a "write about your weekend" asignment or in could be a parent-teacher meeting in which Tony and Ziva explain some things to the teacher. Or, of course, youcould ignore me and not write a sequel at all.
So, congratulations on a great story! You are a wonderful writer, please keep it up!

that is just adorable...

So cute!

aww ... second chapter?

His second day at the school, and he's already talking about guns and dead bodies... One can only imagine what the teacher must be thinking.

haha nice i bet his class was like...O.o nice fic :)

so cute! luvd the stry!

arr this is cute i love it

that is so cute! i couldnt stop smiling all the way through it! great job :)

too cute :)

aw that is so cute!

I could so imagine a tiva kid doing that D

Aw, that's cute. Tony and Ziva would have a cute kid, I think. And wow, that's one hell of a family.

C.

That was absolutely cute!