Reviews for Dearly Beloved
northernlion196 chapter 24 . 8/28/2014
Wonderful story, please update! They're not even at the end of the first part of the game!
Guest chapter 24 . 6/27/2014
Update you.
MakeItSwarkle chapter 23 . 7/22/2013
This is awesome! I love the way you portray Anna and the way everyone else seems so IC, just like in the game.
The AU idea itself is wonderfuIl, too. And the family fluff is great, also. Not to mention Kratos and his perfect existence! So awesome! how can your writing be so good?
I hope you continue soon! c:
Love, makeitswarkle.
Yume Hanabi chapter 23 . 10/25/2010
Beautiful.
DaisKuruna chapter 6 . 10/1/2010
This...I don't have words for how amazing this chapter is...I couldn't hardly read the last few paragraphs because my eyes were so full of tears... That was brilliantly written and brilliantly thought out. Thank you.
BigBossofMoss chapter 23 . 9/7/2010
Real emotion in this chapter. Hits ya right in the heart.

This was very well written C.E.
BigBossofMoss chapter 22 . 9/7/2010
I got to reading this finally. I couldn't get into it before but now I finally have.

Colette POV was very interesting and you got her personality right down to the letter and the fight between Kvar, Kratos, Lloyd, and Anna was intense. Good job.
Ryuu no Kami chapter 23 . 8/10/2010
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Oh I have read ALL DAY and now I see that it has ended! Oh what a journey it has been for me! This story is just amazing! I had so much other things to get done, and I did nothing but read! What am I supposed to do now!

Anyways, very very good (well, beyond that. My mind is mush right now...) Loved the ranch scenes, and "Mama's Boy" that I failed to comment on earlier. I thought that was cute. As were a lot of other things, but I just couldn't stop reading...I apologize.

I hope you have an update coming soon. I have very much enjoyed reading some 100,000 plus words in two days!
Ryuu no Kami chapter 6 . 8/9/2010
Wow...WOW!

So I usually don't read AU's, mostly because when I do, it's out of control and ruins the topic. But since I am madly in love with your stories, I couldn't resist.

And I am so happy I did! This is amazing! Even tho, I was boo hooing a lot in this chapter. Marriage drama...so thick I could have eaten it for dinner! Really really well done!

I hope to read a few more chapters before I pass out, so if you do not see another chapter, I couldn't keep my eyes open :)

Again, wonderful work so far! I cannot WAIT for the rest!
AccountInvisible chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Ooooh... the SUSPENSE!

Awesome work as always! Sorry I dropped off the face of the planet for a while XD. Anyways, cool job!

You actually made me tear up towards the middle of this one... I love stuff like this!
Key to Soul chapter 22 . 7/17/2010
Don't really feel like logging in right now... So...

Sorry for not reviewing in so long, but I've been suffering from major ToS writer's block (in case you haven't noticed because I haven't updated in like a million years).

Anyway, I really like this chapter.

Your treatment of Anna is masterful, as always. Love the interaction between her and Kratos. Keep that up, for sure.

This story is so bittersweet, and I love it.
BigBossofMoss chapter 21 . 7/5/2010
This was a good chapter.

I hope you can get the next one up soon...
BigBossofMoss chapter 20 . 6/27/2010
You are so girly.

Good character development and this was a good chapter.
BigBossofMoss chapter 19 . 6/25/2010
No...

Good chapter though.
CorrineAri chapter 18 . 6/19/2010
Yay! Chocolate! :3

(Clears throat) anyway... I'm loving the story.
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