I wouldn't have thought this was your first Bleach story, you did very well. I would love it if you would make a sequel, preferably about Kurosaki asking Byakuya their question on samurai and his answer, hopefully in graphic detail as you're very good at lemons and YAOI.

Awesome and really hot fic! XD loved it, really well descrived, do I can't imagine Shuuhei with his captain...

Oh and thanks for the info about the samurais!

XD That was damn hot. x3

Excellent story. Well written, a few weird and odd mistakes but overall nicely done. Except for the mention of Kaname and Hisagi...that was a big no-no for me. haha

-Zev

Ah, yes...the way of the samurai. I read about it Wikipedia...heh heh heh.

I liked it except I found the movement from the computer to sex a little.. I don't know, it seemed to lack some sort of build up, but other wise it was a very good story and now I kind of want to write a 'Renji and Shuhei look at internet end up having sex' type of story. xP

Okay, I'll freely admit that that was DARN HOT.

But when I read this bit:

" “Show me how you want me to touch you, Renji.”

Renji pinked."

I promptly exploded. OMG, I'm still laughing. I don't know if you meant that to be hilarious, but it certainly was. You are awesome.

That was smexy!

wow i love the story so much good job

yaoi between this 2 is awesome

*bows to u **blows a kiss* thanks for this story

damn that was hot!

very interesting

That was very hot and fabulous smut and the way that Shuuhei and Renji interact with each other was really perfect! :)

Very hot. Hm...I wouldn't mind if Renji and Shuuhei came over to play on my computer if they included me!