Just Perfect. Really leaves impact on reader.

oh Light, such a man of a word. that's what i like about him - what said is done :D

anyway, i liked this one

“I promise. You will die first.”

gah, i shivered.

AND HE DID; HE DID! *sobs* This was so sad! I read it out loud to myself (cause I do that...) and my sister was in the room, and she started crying with me. *sniff*

aw that was so good, i love reading about any kind of relationship between L and Light, just reading about the way their minds are working things just makes it seem like such a deeper bond ig. Anyay, nice one-shot, i had to wonder what L would do if Light DID die before him.

“I promise. You will die first.”

Oh Light, how right you are.