"A-and when I think of them I will tell you"

Similar to the line Alan Cummings spoke as Glitch in Tin Man...

Awesome!

She a flat ass lmaoooooooo

This has a lot of potential. After chapter 2 it gets a bit choppy bit you can definitely see the potential for a really great story. I really like your OC Sarah Minion and hope you might continue the story or write more Floop or Minion stories. There is a serious lack of them on this site. Kinda makes me sad because they're such great characters.

very upset there was no fucking in the imagination room, really killed the mood. Still got the job done though. 8/10

Hey, just wanted to say; I really enjoyed reading your story! I would very much like to read more! also I really hope that they end up together! I love Floop and want him to be happy XD so yeah I love this and can't wait for an update! :D

What a delightful little story! You've got Mr. Floop's personality down to a science.

That is so sweet! I hope she tells him just how much she likes it.

I'm glad that she made amends with him. There is so much room for their relationship to grow.

Hello, dear author! This is probably a really random and asinine review, but I'd just like to tell you that from the 5, although short, chapters posted, I enjoyed the writing (as well as what little plot appeared). If it's of no inconvenience, I think this story should be continued. I can definitely see a good romance trapped up in Floop somewhere, and though this was my first read on the matter, it was good enough to get me interested. If it's completely dead and unable to be continued, I'll understand; three or so years is quite a bit of time to pick a story back up and sweep the dust off like no pause was taken. Well, best of luck to your writing. - Florence The Impaler

I love it please update soon.

She's so mean! D:

Fegan needs some happiness...

This was a really good start. I like the character's portrayals so far.

Yes I know it's been so long but this is so AWESOME.

can't wait for the next chapter.