Reviews for Harry Potter and the Alchemist's Apprentice
himalay.senapati chapter 4 . 7/10
I really wish that this story had continued, it had a lot of potential :)
mumphie chapter 4 . 4/29
So, Harry is a Goblin?
Another fantastic story. I hope hat whatever life through at you: school, new job, marriage, kids, etc. - will soon give you time to reminisce about these wonderful stories - and come back! I'd love to see what happens next! How much better does Harry do in his OWLs? Does he make it back to Hogwarts for his 7th year? Does he learn things about the castle that was lost in time? How does he like young Dumbledores? What House is he in? Do they only have the four House tables, or do they have round ones for mixing? Will he somehow make it back to his time and be able to use this wonderful training? If so - will he find that Nicholas is still alive because he gave a fake to Dumbles? Or, will he just have to make friends in his new reality? Will he wait for Tom to be born and adopt him? Will giving him love change things? I do hope you will return to your hobby of writing fanfic! :)
mumphie chapter 2 . 4/29
i wish Harry could keep his name. After all, he could be presented as a distant cousin. He looks so like a Potter, will that create issues? He's lost so much, even the simple things like the map.
Were Elwood's parents magical? I'd hate for them to have to deal with muggleborn prejudice.
mumphie chapter 1 . 4/29
I like that he is learning by doing. It really gives versatility and imagination a chance.
IamKroGan1 chapter 4 . 9/7/2019
This was a good read, pity its abandoned.
didyousaytim chapter 4 . 8/3/2019
Excellent finding Harry the Gryffindor back in the saddle. Little Z much a vampire to not let Harry live too long. Great blend of styles in last fights.

Not another cahpter (or 40) left?

All the best
didyousaytim chapter 3 . 8/3/2019
The first 3 chapters were rather unique, well stage in the past ( though timing of muggle inventions squeezed in to fit the mood... by magic). Great fun with Harry growing up , etc. I dont know what to expect with next chapter.. and here os the rub. With your skiils and flares of inventive imagination, one more chapter is but 40 too short. Perhaps what power Voldemort doesnt know is Harry is coming to a future from the past. Who knows there might even be a real brother for Harry
Debate4life chapter 4 . 10/1/2018
Ooh is he going to be a goblin? That sounds marvellous.
nyx-p1e chapter 4 . 8/28/2017
Awesome fic, absolutely loved it! I love your take on the Flamel's, especially Nicolas - he does dotty old man so much better than Dumbledore! I've loved Harry's exploration of his new time through his studies and the different challenges Nicolas seems determined to throw in his way. Only four chapters in but I feel like I've gone through so much, right alongside Harry. Can't wait to see what his next moth will be like (although I'm guessing he'll be with the goblins with a name like Racksnap)!

I'm also curious to see if there's a over-arching plotline or story, other than Harry learning crazy things and expanding his horizons under Nicolas' tuition. Will Harry ever get back to his own time? Will he end up interacting with Dumbledore, or maybe even Tom Riddle? Or will Harry end up on the other side of the world, quite happily settling down into research or some exciting career? I'm so excited to see what you'll do with this story! Perhaps you've already left hints to Harry's future, but you pack in so much to each chapter that I may have missed them. Your writing style makes me feel as though there are so much more than four chapters!

I can see it's been years since you updated this, but I do hope you get the time and inspiration to continue! Wishing you the best with all your writing :D
0TakaT0 chapter 4 . 8/20/2017
plz update soon. really good so far. ty. sincerely, taka
whrr.trudy chapter 4 . 7/9/2017
Really enjoying your story :)
Treecat1812 chapter 4 . 10/13/2016
Enjoyed this story as well as "Unlocked Knowledge". I favor AU and alternet timeline stories over those that basicly repeat Rowlins. Shame they have not been finished. But in the immortal words of Forest, it happens. Hope to see more of your work soon.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2016
This is quite funny and very good so far I would love to read more when you get a chance to write more on this.
Corwyn chapter 4 . 1/4/2016
A fascinating tale. Please continue it if you can. Thank you for sharing it.
Hubler99 chapter 4 . 10/31/2015
I love just love this story, The way you have Written, Harry and Nick is right on and getting Harry to become his own person is something grand!. I can not wait for more so I do hope you are still writing this story I have Added You to My Favorites and also to follow You as well as I'am sure your other stories are just as Great! Thank You for reading this review :)
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