Love, love, love this! Just beautiful. Funny then sad then so hopeful and happy. Sigh. Yes.

lovely.

The part with the musical Treasure Island made me laugh, great songs in that P

The ending was both sad and hopeful.

I really liked it.

I did not think this could be pulled off in any way but as a humour fic. And I am thoroughly delighted to be proved wrong.

This was great!

It made me wonder, a little, how many other times Jack (or possibly James) has gone back to Point A to start again when things go wrong. A kind of eternal reworking.

But absolutely beautiful. Particularly in the visual ways you've written the various 'futures'. My favourite part would have to be the alleyway scene, but then I'm a sucker for a bit of angst mixed into my romance. _

Congrats. This was really worth reading.

Hmm, very interesting.

Would this be Nine that says this?

“Can your stupid little monkey brain even begin to comprehend the danger..." 'cause I could totatally see him saying it. lol.