Esyla,

I love your story. I,ve read it a few times but this was the first time that i've signed in and created an account. Your own story, even more than Susan's breaks my heart. I too have battled with depression and at the worst even Narnia couldn't bring me back. But once the worst had passed Narnia was there waiting for me and continues to comfort me.
While I love your story, I wish that is was not incomplete. You explored so much in the story that you were unable to complete. Maybe some day you'll have healed enough to go back and write everything that you meant to. If you do I'll be waiting eagerly to read it.
Regards Maedhbh

when I read: I miss you daddy, I immediately started to cry. I feel bad for your family, but these losses can strengthen us. You will see him again. and he shall comfort you. there will be no sadness but joy. he is watching from the heaven's.

“I don’t want to die, I’m too young. I don’t even have boobs yet!” best. Line. Ever!

OH MY GOD ! I LOVE THIS FANFIC
(but this is very shortlike drabble, but I love it heheheh)

I see it has been some years now, but I am truly sorry for your father.

Thanks to your beautiful and sad words I’m fighting tears in the classroom...you truly are an amazing writer.
I hope your dad is okay..best wishes

Hey, I hope you are okay, I really do. I read your story in one night and it felt so heartbreaking when you wrote about your father, so I really hope you are okay and happy.

good job. the ending was a bit more abrupt than I expected, but it worked and it was good

Now it is 2018 i like reading yor story, it somehow cheered me up. I dont like sad endings at all (even if thez are beautiful ), thats why i was looking for a fanfic with a happy one and i have found yours. I like happy endings, because they give a lot of hope. THX

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This is the most AMAZING fan fiction I have ever read way to go!

I love your story. But I'm so so soooooooooooooo sad now

Can ppl stop mentioning Caspian's son it's bad enough that susan isn't the mother.
Or that the siblings will die in this one just like the last battle

okay,you broke my heart the moment they died and I nearly cried all night,it is such a amazing hope you didn't end it so soon,do you have any idea how to find a good Suspian story like ,good job and I hope i can read more.