| Reviews for Malfoy and the Mudblood |
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  Mi-chan chapter 65 . 12/20/2018 I’ve read this story. It is great, took a bit time on developing them, quite long actually. But in the end, it justifies. I just hope that it won’t end on a bad note, is there a sequel? |
 N0S0ul.x chapter 1 . 6/20/2018 so yeh... story is oké, not hating but I see no progress in Draco’s and Jesses relationship. I know I’m only on chap 20 but still. |
| Wikked chapter 28 . 1/9/2017 I'd love to see Jess dress Harry up as a snitch, that way he'd have to walk around as a gigantic golden ball xD |
| Guest chapter 65 . 4/27/2016 Jess and most of the characters are so one dimensional. Jess is a MMS ('Mudblood' Mary Sue). The plot is okay but very boring...everyone speaks nearly the same way. I just want to find out if Jess and Draco will be together and married in the future. |
| 1dracomalfan chapter 20 . 3/29/2016 Shape all the way he was so misjudged up to the end and he deserved a shot of a life where he did not have to hide as such. |
| Val chapter 65 . 3/11/2016 Please please continue this is amazing and you're an amazing writer. Please don't let this story die |
| Xanari15 chapter 1 . 9/10/2015 Sequel? |
| Emma chapter 18 . 7/23/2015 I have this headcanon for your fic where when Jess has to get out of bed in the middle of the night when Madison cries, she sings to her to get her to sleep. Malfoy pretends to sleep but actually listens to her sing just because he finds the sound of her voice soothing. |
| K.Daniels chapter 65 . 7/20/2015 Oh my word... What just happened?! I loved this! And thank you for keeping it clean! |
| Usernames.are.masks chapter 17 . 6/19/2015 Oh, come on. Give Blaise some more credit. He's way smoother than that. |
| Usernames.are.masks chapter 12 . 6/19/2015 Ugh o can jut imagine while they're studying and doing homework Draco makes some sort of snide comment and Jess just "I HAVE MET PRICKS, BUT YOU, MY FRIEND, ARE THE FUCKING CACTUS." |
| bxbbletea chapter 1 . 1/3/2015 The project sounds so like We Got Married omg I'm crying #koreanvariety |
| Enlighten chapter 1 . 12/27/2013 If you ever want help re-editing this story and resubmitting, let me know. There's potential. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/20/2013 Ugh, this is pretty terribly written. You describe what the characters do in such a boring and unengaging way. "Jess then did this, then did that, then did this" is so boring. You barely describe anything more then the basics. Also, Jess is so one dimensional and the definition of a Mary Sue. On the plus side, your dialogue isn't that bad. I found my self laughing a couple of times, but overall this story is god awful. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 Honestly, Jess is the biggest Mary Sue I've ever read about in my life. You make her too perfect, and naming her after yourself? How pathetic. |
