Yep. You broke me.

Dude, you are blushing?

That, was very well done. And I tell you, I am very surprised because as I mentioned, I usually don't like this kind of stuff. But it was hot, and it was tasteful and as usual, believable.

Nice job indeed.

Maia.

Excellent. You not only captured their perfect dialogue you also wrote a hot hot hot story and wrote it well.

...I think the rest of us are blushing too. I think this is the first ever Danny/Rusty scene I have ever read... Well, one that's more than just a simple kiss. And I think you did a fine job...

But yeah. Totally blushing. -Silver

No. No! Why was it only one night? *sighs sadly* They're so utterly perfect together. But as far as canon goes, you wrote them perfectly. Very nice job.

... *wicked smile*

That was a lot of fun. Some of the dialog was amazing! Exactly what I would expect from those two. 3

I will say this is the first Ocean's fanfic I've read. And WOW. My two favorite characters gettin' busy. It's wonderful. Their 'unique' dialogue you've managed to capture brilliantly. And the descriptions are simple yet effective...and hawt. What I would't pay to actually watch this! Well done!

can i just say, HOT? m are you going to continue this, cuz there's a lot of directions this could go if you did and i'd love to read them/it D

: ) Reading "Danny/Rusty" and seeing the "M" rating, I was expecting to be blushing madly as well by the time I finished reading. Surprisingly, I didn't. But going through the story again, I can definitely see why: It feels too natural, too logical, too fitting to blush.

I've already mentioned before that you write DannyandRusty perfectly. You manage to capture their very essence and because of that it's sexy and hot and all - but it's never uncomfortable. To write, yeah, but if you're reading it, it just flows perfectly. Like magnets.

Love the fact that we don't immediatly get Rusty's suggestion and that the whole thing has to develop, that Danny has to ponder a bit and that Rusty does get nervous after all.

Another wonderful thing is them not speaking at all, because there's this unity and things really don't have to be explained.

... The ending was bittersweet. Rusty always being the voice of reason, even in this situation, and Danny being overwhelmed and everything... knowing that Rusty wants, too, but somehow finds the strength to say No... I think the whole last dialogue really defines their relationship. Especially the "we don't sleep with guys" - "we're not guys" part...

Well, what do i say?

Wow, the chemistry between them..

"..explaining us is going to be tricky enough. Explaining 'us' would be impossible."- Aha, thats defiantly true :)

Great onshot!

InSilva,

What a great read! I love your dialogue "...explaining us is going to be tricky enough. Explaining 'us' would be impossible." Great line! You have true insight in to the chemistry between Danny and Rusty, and MAN did you nail the 'finishing each other's thoughts and sentences' thing. I hope you make this into a series. :)

Moon Called

You know, I read this this morning. Before I went to work. Some mental images linger you know. ;D

So. You keep saying you can't write hot. Then you keep disproving yourself. In ways that I was going to quote by way of objective evidence, but suddenly found that I was blushing too hard to. Anyway. This is a contradiction. What gives?

I really love this concept. And I love the conversation over a long period of time in the beginning. Just your particular genius conveying that they always, always know what they're talking about even when it's out of nowhere.

And even though it was just a little throwaway, I love the champagne and the stewardess. Because yeah, that man, that smile and I think it'd be too much for me too. (Bet if it had been Rusty in 13 they wouldn't have needed the Gilroy)

The comfortable with each other thing you just did perfectly. Can totally picture the 'what the hell does it matter' expression. And gotta think that other people have found them semi-clothed in each others hotel rooms often enough that there are reasons that, say, Basher stares at the ceiling and makes sure it isn't asked.

'“Nice,” Danny says. “I would have swallowed.”

“You are such a liar.”'

And that exchange coming after that . . . that THAT, is just perfect. Because it's funny and it's just so unbelievably them.

And Danny arguing that they're not guys, wonderful. Because you get what he means, but it's still, well, absurd.

Gotta think though. It probably did happen again, right? From time to time? At times when there wasn't a Tess or an Isobel in the picture, and things had gone particularly well, or particularly scarily, or there wasn't anything good on TV, or they'd drunk the minibar? Or is that just me? Because, yes I get the point, and Rusty's probably right, but still. True love, physical closeness, and a boredom problem lead places.

Anyway, fantastic piece. As always, of course.