| Reviews for Real Proof |
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Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 11/2/2011 Delightful look into their professional (and otherwise) relationship! |
MistEternal chapter 1 . 5/28/2010 This was absolutely perfect! I cried while reading what Tony's gift to her was... I don't have the best words to tell you how much I loved this other than to say I did. I really think your Tony and Pepper were spot on (and Jarvis too). :) |
FoolofaTook17 chapter 1 . 1/6/2010 So, so adorable! I loved the ending "that will be all" lines and just the little details you included in it, like Tony's smudged handwriting and the way he gave Pepper the present. Great job! :) |
kittyblossom chapter 1 . 12/4/2009 You deserve more reviews! The gift was quite cute; better yet were the characterizations and point of view. |
Winteroses chapter 1 . 11/5/2009 Aw this was cute! |
AES13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2008 This was really sweet. It took me a while to get used to a human Jarvis but I found your characterization of Tony and Pepper to be spot on. Thank you! :-) |
VampireLover0513 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008 That was a great read I really enjoyed how much of the character you captured in your work it was like I was there watching it in the theaters. Great Job! |
A.j chapter 1 . 5/29/2008 This is... lovely. You know, anything else I write is going to come out sounding dumb and trite and probably written a hundred other times. I guess I just wanted to let you know that I read this story and loved it. I love the fusion (Oh, JARVIS, Oh, PEPPER) and the hints of care that aren't romantic but could be, but aren't and probably won't ever be. I like that no one in the story is perfect, but they ARE interesting. Thank you so much for this. I don't know how to say it any better, and I'm sorry for that. |
PadmeKenobi chapter 1 . 5/28/2008 This was really great, and I am saddened that it had to come to an end. I love what Tony gave to Pepper, that was real sweet. They were both in character, beautifully so, and I enjoyed this immensely. Wonderful job on their relationship, or even lack thereof. Beautifully written. :D |
Spiritual Stone chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 I loved the movie and I love the story more. 5/5! |
Kawaii Usagi Chan San chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 aww! that was so sweet! there should have at least been a peek on the cheek! tony really is a great guy and they really should get together! _ more please! |
kim chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 I liked this. Using a real Jarvis like in the comic instead of the movieverse AI Jarvis was a little confusing, as this was set in parts of the movie itself. But Tony and Pepper's interaction was very sweet. |
Boomerang Butterfly chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 oh that was wonderful! Tony can be sweet when he puts his mind (and heart) to it! I love that you mad Jarvis a real person, it's a cool new twist to the story. |
Redlioness62 chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 Go story, but Jarvis is a machine, not a real person. |