awahh so sad but so good! I lurve angst . I was kind of hoping that Ino would forgive him but what Shikamaru did was unforgivable. Nice one-shot

oh my bleepin gawd.

SHIKAMARU YOU BASTARD

TT-TT that was so sad but so good ]

i like your style of writing!

And your fic!

shuriken-thrower

Sad story... *sob sob* Makes me want to kill Temari... Bah... Such an evil girl... But it's good... boohoo...

well that was very good lots of feeling.

i LOVE it! Expecialy that the song is made by chris brown! (MY CHRIS BROWN) The story was so sad and ti made want to go kil Temari again. (gets out shot gun) BYE:D

shikaino is the only ino pairing I don't like, but this was quite nice. It would be cool if you did a sequel where she's with someone new like Kiba or Kankurou, I don't know who, and Shikamaru is glad she's happy now or something...

Oh.. My.. God ;~;

Now that, my friend, has to be the BEST tragic fic I've ever read.

I love your songfics :'D So sad yet very beautiful. I envy how you actually have the time to write all he things you do! -suffers in school-

Anyhow, you rock, and keep on writing those amazing fictions of yours. :D

A moment of laxity... that's all it takes to lose everything you have.

He really broke her heart, didn't he? And he didn't really want to. Such is the cruelty of the game of love.

One can only hope love is as gentle as it is cruel. But Cupid is fickle.

He wouldn't cry, would he? Still, it might just be a matter of time before he breaks down completely.

... Nicely done.