This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. One of the few ones that is able to develop the characters without changing their personality completely. Great work!

I loved it. I am happy you added an epilogue and gave Orihime and Ichigo a happy ending.

Wow... That was fantastic! One of the best stories I've read in ages! You are an extremely talented writer, my friend

reread and still just as tragically beautiful

aight straight up i loved this,it waz awesome but i juz wish that grimmjow and her cud hav ended up bein togeather and happily ever after but still this fanfic rocked

I really liked this chapter. It shows Grimm's animal side, and I love the ending. How she had bit him instead of the other way around. You did a great job!

-Ramona F.

That was a brilliant story and I can't make up my mind as to who I think she should be with! Beautifully written and great characterisation! You make your readers really feel what your characters do, now if you'll excuse me I have to go bawl my eyes out at both endings!

Great first chapter, loved it, well done~!

Awesome story! I love this. You are an amazing writer and the way you showed love in your story is just beautiful.

Wow! This was so sweet compared to what I was expecting from a Grimmjow fic, but it was really nice. Loved the ending. You really made Orihime grow as a character as she should have.

First, Grimmjow didn't lose his arm in his fight with Ichigo. Tousen cut it off AFTER Grimmjow got back to Heuco Mundo. All that chigo did was cut up Grimm's chest really bad.

Second, the Arrancar who beat up Orihime is named Menoly, not Melony.

Third, you should get a beta to go through and fix the grammatical and punctuation errors in this. It's good, but could be better if the grammar and punctuation were correct.

Loved the story so much! It was truly a delight! Thank you so much for it.

Oh my gosh, that was simply amazing!

I loved it because you actually took the time to describe their thoughts and emotions, rather than just their actions. It was a really heartfelt fic!

I'm glad Orihime didn't die, but it is very sad that she and Grimmjow couldn't be together... they make such a good couple... :P

Anyways, uber kudos for this fab story!

Fifi x

Aww... very nice. Its a bit sad, seeing that Grimmjow & Orihime didn't get together, but still good non-the-less. The only thing is it got a bit hard to read when there were two people talking in one paragraph. Remember to always make a new paragraph when someone new starts talking! hehe! Anyways, besides that, you did a great job & it was a great story. Thanxs! :) :p ;)

It's simple really: LOVED IT!

Well...i guess those words really do sum up how i feel 'bout this story. Go figure...

Anyways, before my comment gets more awkward, just congrats on such a good fanfic. Definitely a fav.