beautiful. absolutely beautiful

This is SOO adorable, I'll cry!

Fuckin' PERFECT. I loved every bit of this so much! Great work!

Awesome! 3

CRYING. because they are perfect together, and skfnfkvhdkcndkckeld.
I have no other words, because this is just fantastic.

FAN-FUCKINGLY-TASTIC.
seriously.

3

XD
Hiruma is a fckin good boyfriend though XD

That was AMAZING! *splutters* WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN SINCE I'VE BECOME OBSESSED WITH HIRUMAMO? I f-ing love this. No words can describe how much I loved this. NOw, I must go look at your other stories.

I love how this can easily be played in my head. :) Mamori's stubbornness (at times) and Hiruma's subtle way to show he cared when she was crying, how angry Mamori was when Hiruma was planning to leave without telling her... It just makes me puff up with happiness. I also love how you easily fast forwarded without disrupting the flow.

Thank you for this wonderful oneshot. :)

I've read that story before, but I can't remember if I left a review, so here I go~

You caught their personalities AMAZINGLY well! Even we all want kisses and hugs and loveely moments all the time, it just doesn't sit well with HiruMamo. But what you've written catches exactly how it would be, if it does happen. Good job, you totally deserve the praise! *and kick in the butt, courtesy of Hiruma kekeke*

Bye~

~Gaara's cherry~

quite is different with 'quit' or 'quiet'...

good story tho,

Ho!

Chou Chuite!

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ah, there are too few hiru/mamo fics out there! but the few, like yours, are really great! u were able to fast forward to important events without making the story seem choppy, which is great. _ please continue to write more hiru/mamo stories!

no words can describe this, i love it!

... D'AW! That was too darn cute. I was grinning like an idiot at the end of part 10 because it was SO Hiruma.

They were both amazingly in character, in fact, which I consider really hard with these two (especially Hiruma).

Anyways, great job~