I liked this story, I really did. And I'm not flaming but to me it felt like you pulled this from stage left. The pregnancy, the whole love thing, everything. I know that this is only a one shot but this is so left field that I laughed through the sad parts. It was a tad unbelievable. The ending was cheesy. And I felt that it was just too easy for Zach to get out of what he did. I love Zach as a character and I was peeved when they did this in the episode, but it was unrealistic. I was like, "what the eff?"

I did like it though, just saying, because despite what I thought I read it through to the end and reviewed.

-Suny

OMG! i love it!

continue please!

This is a tiny bit ooc but i like the idea behind the story and especially how zack gets off :)

A really amazing fic for a rare pairing.

Aw. So cute. I loved it.

good story so the ship is interesting and keep writing.

Oh My God. I'm crying.

How come I didn't see this story before? I love it. I do. But I'm a die hard CZ fan, so of course I love it. THANX for this. It's so on my favourites now.

HOWL!1! yay!

That was such a touching story! I hope Zack comes back. He and cam make such a great couple! nice work :D

hi i think this story is amazing and i was wondering if you would continue or write another story of its kind...:D

beautiful story!

OH MY GOD, how awesome is that! Ahh, I LOVED this! Happy, happy ending! Wow, this was so good...now THAT would be a great addition to the fourth season! *Sigh* I hope...

Great job! So sweet! (:

Angelica

This is so good! You did an excellent job writing this... Keep up the good work. I wish this is how it really happened!

Love the story. I'm new to the world of Bones fanfic but I'm quickly becoming a fan of the C/Z your's was the best I've read so far. Very well written and I hope to read more C/Z work from you in the future.

This is good. I don't think this is what the producers had in mind, but it sure sits better with me.