Oh dear! POOR INDY! I love your story! Please continue! Update soon? thanks!

Considering Mutt saved the last installment of Indiana Jones this is very good work - great characterization of Mutt & nice story where are you going with it though?

Wow! What a terrible thing to have happened! Poor Mutt! Good writing. Wow. I'm all twisted up inside.

Wow, great story! It's so sad that Indy died, but the storyline is awesome nonetheless. I'm ecstatic you brought back Shorty, he was one of my fav characters! Continue soon!

Hey I think you're doing a really great job with the story. Mutt really seems to be "in character" which is great, I don't know if it was just me, but he really didn't seem to have a whole lot of screen time to really get to know the character. Where as with Indy and Marion we already knew them as characters.

I'm glad to see that you're brining Shorty back and you seem to have a handle on his accent which is always nice.

Also a little side note Chapter 2 was kinda weird for me to read, because of "Mr. Jolly" which I'm more formillar to mean my father. My last name is 'Jolly' just a little side note.

You're doing great I can't wait for chapter 4!

XoXo

Tatiana

And things are getting interesting!

Keep more coming pwease?

-AceCade

Wow. I feel so bad for Mutt. Poor kid.

And Indy... wow. what a tragic horrific way to die!

-AceCade

Awesome - write more soon!

WOW amazing so far! I'm actually going to try to read all your stories because they all sound so good and I can't wait to read them! You're lucky you are going to college for writing and directing, I would LOVE to do that, but no colleges around here offer that, sad I know lol Well update soon!

OfLoveAndLust

Indy was killed/mauled (

aw poor indy! that is a horrible death, well thrid death really. i mean first he's shot then he falls, then he's ripped apart by TIGERS!

but good storyline i really like it update fast

-Ells

I have a bad feeling about her...

This story is awesome. I think I said that when I reviewed the previous part, but it's awesome enough that I have to repeat it.

This is really good! Can't wait for more!

That is cool! I can't wait till you write more! see-ya!

gah! I need more update freaking soon!