Thanks for the story. The second half dragged, but kept to the plot well. I have one criticism about the grammar. Than and then are completely different words, and to and too are not interchangeable. It was a fresh take on a well traveled plot. Thanks.

rape, graphic

you are such a great writer. AS harry was talking i started crying myself

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Severus Snapes Birthday is not in December. It is in January.

Me and my boyfriend will make each other feel better. Especially me because right now me and the middle of my older sisters aren’t going together that well and she fighting constantly with her husband. Me and my boyfriend don’t see each other that often but call and text each other everyday. Both of us are to disabled to get our license so we use the ride or a family member. Living with six people in a medium sized house and only four bedrooms isn’t really a good thing for me. Especially when your nephew steals from you at 12.

Severus Snape's birthday is January 9, 1960

Not reading this, I was just curious about something. With authors who write slash, why do they feel the need to make EVERYONE gay, or at the very least bi? In the summary alone there’re three gays and one bi, two of which are pedophiles and one of which is a rapist.

Why are writers answer to child abuse making the victim date a person old enough to be thier fathers. They need parenting not sex with another adult

i love this story, don't get me wrong. but the title should be crappy promises.

you got a lot of severus's bavkstory wrong, but this is still really good

really amazing!

Hi I like your story

That was good off to the squeal.

Love it