This was amazing. Pure amazing.

I like this, please continue.

Thank you for the story. It is very well writen and romantic as well. I enjoyed the nice way you tell the story, very well done.

um...wow that was really good!

WOW Such an intricate beautiful story. I absolutely adore it.

Powerful imagery. You successfully painted a picture of Edward's indecision and of his love for Bella. I was engrossed and wished that there was more written. I felt the sting of his bite and the pleasure of his kiss. Beautifully written. Thanks.

OMG I was SOBBING throughout this whole thing! You are AMAZING, don't let anyone tell you differently. I can't wait to read more :)

Speechless... I love it!

that was really really good... at first i was wondering when the kiss would happen but you fit it perfectly in the end! good job!

WOAH i cannot see at all where this is gunna go, please continue!

u had so much description and wording... i loved it... it was one of the best stories i have read on here...

I love the theme! Of all the concepts in Twilight, the one that appeals to me the most is Bella's complete and unconditional willingness to sacrifice everything for her love.

Happy writing,

Harry

I really liked this story. You really seem to know who Bella and Edward are. So much so that (in my opinion) absolutely nothing was out of character. The only problem I saw was that there were a few words which were used improperly. For instance, you once used passed where you should have used past. Nothing huge, but I thought I should let you know. Other than that, I fervently enjoyed the story. Nice work.

good..little gory..but still interesting

that was really good.

keep up the good work!