Moral of this chapter: friends, Always, ALWAYS go with your gut! Bella let her excitement over the offer of superior strings over-ride her initial gut feeling that the writing looked "too unprofessional for a teacher", and her own balking at leaving the precious instrument unattended.

and of course the kiss was too quick for her to say, don't do anything you don't mean. But of course Edward DOES mean it, but Bella won't think so. Unfortunately, all Edward has really done is paint a bright glowing TARGET on Bella! If he thinks he has discouraged Tanya, oh think again, Knight in shining Piano! Tanya will just believe if she gets rid of Bella, Edward will be hers again (which he never was to begin with, but she doesn't see that-she's THAT delusional) Bella SHOULD be afraid of Tanya...very afraid.

i’m enjoying the story so far, but the writing style is very disjointed and is making it difficult to read. there’s no flow and everything feels really abrupt. i’m going to try and keep going, but i’m not sure how far i’ll get

Loved it, thank you.

I loved this but wish it was longer. I need to see them stay together after school. Even if only through a 5 years later epilog. But it was so very good.
Thank you for writing,
Mickey

What instruments do rosalie and emmett play?

i love this story!

awe... so sweet, i love this story :)

loving this story so far!

I think the story is really good, but I'm really disappointed in Bella. She's weak to the point of being pathetic and basically lets Tanya walk all over her.

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Good story. Thanks

Finally...

Oh, tell him already.

Took him long enough.