I know that loosing your parents even at a young age like Harry Potter is tough considering the type of relatives that the headmaster put him with because he thought “they grow to love him” the ironic thing about all the Harry Potter movies and the books is that in a weird sort of way I think Harry understood Tom Riddle’s pain considering that Tom Riddle was also a orphan and essential treated the same as Harry growing up, but with one major difference where as Tom let his anger and hatred turn inwards to basically in the end self destruction, Harry never let that happen ok sure he got upset over some comments or two and how he wasn’t getting any help with his destiny and mission to destroy the horcruxes but in all fairness I think he had trouble with being able to get any adults to believe in what he experiencing and going through. Life unfortunately even in fiction is hard and the hero or heroine is definitely going to have struggles and I’ll admit as fan of all the Harry Potter movies and the fanfics he’s gone through quite a lot of them, but he always seems to come out on top. So I say right on Harry Potter git er done!

Harry's right in this context. Heroes don't do it for fame and expecting to be praised, they help others because it's the right thing even when they have doubts. They are willing to put their lives on the line to ensue the safety of others.

This is really on of the best stories out there, good with details no rushing and development goes steady. Too bad it never continued even if it was passed 4th year like you said, a sort of epilogue could have done really well. defeat of voldy and h/hr married the sequel isn't made either such a shame.
-question though? they have more maps of the grounds and are smarter why have they not found the fake auror? they could have exposed him already and learned about voldy.
Very well done with Ron and Ginny this how it should have been if there were not friends, just the right amount without to much bashing. Though i wonder why molly or mr. weasley not heard of by now, either to harry etc.. or there kids cause think the twins would have mentioned a lot things.

I am not that far in the story yet but can't wait to have finished it, either way doesn't matter cause i see the story is stopped too bad..
That future harry did not even give some hints of who his future wife would be is so wrong, with the changes the young harry makes it could easily be someone else.
And that is next point you suddenly adress tonks with the pair later in the story? ehm she is family a cousin wouldn't that be weird and she is also a lot older, some romance there should wait until harry is 18 or something. this at least give some time for h/hr romance instead of sharing so soon. (and she is not mentioned in the information above)

Gave this story a chance for the first 15 chapters and I’m sorry but your excuse of saying the first 3 books are to good to be written differently is a sorry excuse of not being able to create your own ideas. Your story follows cannon wayyyyy to much and easily gets boring and bland. The little changes you made so far are very little and are not that significant. I’m glad this story is dead

Alright, I have to admit that over the last couple of weeks I've been reading this story, and I have to admit that I've fallen in love with it. I hope that you can continue it sometime in the future and hope that you are doing well during your absence.

DASM

Is there ron bashing?

Please bring out the next chapter soon as your able.

What Happened After That Did Harry Think Of Stuff And Please Update The Story Soon.

What Happened After Harry And Hermione Get Together And Please Update The Story Soon.

Does Harry Potter And Hermion Do The Deed And Does He Go To Grave Yard And Please Update The Story Soon.

What Happened After That Does Harry Meet Tom Riddle And Please Update The Story Soon.

So much for a sequel . This is what I hate about fanfics, they can be beautifully written and have such original and lovely arcs, but they still get abandoned. Why post something without completing it? I suppose being a ravenclaw makes me want to do a job right and completely.

This feels too much like one of your Naruto stories to be a believable HP story so I'll pass. That and you haven't finished it. If it was complete I might of persevered but knowing in the end I'll only be disappointed I'm not even going to try.

Good