Reviews for He Can't See It
WildlyLaughing chapter 3 . 5/10
Wow, this was just downright amazing. I didn't even think of using Marcie as a main character in a fanfic before, and honestly I can count on one hand how many times I've read a story with her actually being important. Even though it's been a while, I'd love to read more of this fanfic!
Burned Cookie chapter 3 . 6/5/2019
This was a really emotional and captivating story. I do not say this lightly, as i usually only have emotions on the scale of happy/sad/angry.

I dont think you will continue this but thank you for what you did write.
Shadowpawzzz chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
Loved the story but was sad with the cliff hanger I wanted to see more of Marcie and Xander interaction.
entelejent chapter 3 . 8/10/2018
Excellent writing, thanks for the story! I most like the humor: it seems spot-on for the characters, especially for Xander, and the invisible girl's perspective brings its own addition.
Qriiz chapter 3 . 7/3/2018
wonderfull... too bad it's from 7 years ago. T_T
Guest chapter 3 . 8/20/2017
Just read all of this after finding the TV tropes page, this story is amazing even if its dead.

I hope eventually the author will honour us with another update. This story is amazing.
ShaiGar chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
Gods I hope you update this story at some point, it's damned awesome and deserves more love.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/22/2017
I'm not sure when this chapter was posted, but I think this is the first time I've been to XanderZone in a number of years. All I know is that this is an amazing job of storytelling and characterization, and it would be a crime for it not to go forward. I lost touch with my own muse some time ago, so I do understand if it's just gone, but I truly hope that is not the case, because I would be thrilled to see more.
JesterDGrowlithe chapter 3 . 10/21/2015
You know Marcie became invisible when everybody ignored her() so if everybody thinks Xander is a psychic then won't he become one?

Also you should write a new chapter because this story is awesome enough to make a writer reinspired... Ev-specially if the writer left it years ago and forgotten what he/she was writing beside the general outline...
racnor chapter 3 . 2/18/2015
Impressive story. I love the emotional rollercoster.

Hope Marcie catches a break.
shugokage chapter 3 . 2/1/2015
Interesting idea!
KyliaQuilor chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
This is very good fic - an odd concept, but one that you do very well. I'd love to see more of it - thoroughly enjoyable and well written.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/8/2014
Hope you're still updating...
Luan Mao chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
Another good chapter. Now I'm wondering if Marcie is ever going to be able to show herself, so to speak. She might have painted herself into a corner, and it would be just **too embarrassing** to let everyone, or just Xander, find out what she'd been up to the past couple days. What kind of self-esteem issues would a teenage invisible girl have?
Luan Mao chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
Another good chapter. It now appears the mystery girl is invisible; assuming she's a canon character, presumably I'd have picked up on that if I'd seen more than a couple of episodes of BtVS. Having to figure it out is more fun, though.

The editor's note was really funny. It calls out for an omake in which Sally *was* a pre-op tranny at the time of being vamped.
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