| Reviews for He Can't See It |
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WildlyLaughing chapter 3 . 5/10 Wow, this was just downright amazing. I didn't even think of using Marcie as a main character in a fanfic before, and honestly I can count on one hand how many times I've read a story with her actually being important. Even though it's been a while, I'd love to read more of this fanfic! |
Burned Cookie chapter 3 . 6/5/2019 This was a really emotional and captivating story. I do not say this lightly, as i usually only have emotions on the scale of happy/sad/angry. I dont think you will continue this but thank you for what you did write. |
Shadowpawzzz chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Loved the story but was sad with the cliff hanger I wanted to see more of Marcie and Xander interaction. |
entelejent chapter 3 . 8/10/2018 Excellent writing, thanks for the story! I most like the humor: it seems spot-on for the characters, especially for Xander, and the invisible girl's perspective brings its own addition. |
Qriiz chapter 3 . 7/3/2018 wonderfull... too bad it's from 7 years ago. T_T |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/20/2017 Just read all of this after finding the TV tropes page, this story is amazing even if its dead. I hope eventually the author will honour us with another update. This story is amazing. |
ShaiGar chapter 1 . 8/20/2017 Gods I hope you update this story at some point, it's damned awesome and deserves more love. |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/22/2017 I'm not sure when this chapter was posted, but I think this is the first time I've been to XanderZone in a number of years. All I know is that this is an amazing job of storytelling and characterization, and it would be a crime for it not to go forward. I lost touch with my own muse some time ago, so I do understand if it's just gone, but I truly hope that is not the case, because I would be thrilled to see more. |
JesterDGrowlithe chapter 3 . 10/21/2015 You know Marcie became invisible when everybody ignored her() so if everybody thinks Xander is a psychic then won't he become one? Also you should write a new chapter because this story is awesome enough to make a writer reinspired... Ev-specially if the writer left it years ago and forgotten what he/she was writing beside the general outline... |
racnor chapter 3 . 2/18/2015 Impressive story. I love the emotional rollercoster. Hope Marcie catches a break. |
shugokage chapter 3 . 2/1/2015 Interesting idea! |
KyliaQuilor chapter 3 . 11/14/2014 This is very good fic - an odd concept, but one that you do very well. I'd love to see more of it - thoroughly enjoyable and well written. |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/8/2014 Hope you're still updating... |
Luan Mao chapter 3 . 6/29/2014 Another good chapter. Now I'm wondering if Marcie is ever going to be able to show herself, so to speak. She might have painted herself into a corner, and it would be just **too embarrassing** to let everyone, or just Xander, find out what she'd been up to the past couple days. What kind of self-esteem issues would a teenage invisible girl have? |
Luan Mao chapter 2 . 6/28/2014 Another good chapter. It now appears the mystery girl is invisible; assuming she's a canon character, presumably I'd have picked up on that if I'd seen more than a couple of episodes of BtVS. Having to figure it out is more fun, though. The editor's note was really funny. It calls out for an omake in which Sally *was* a pre-op tranny at the time of being vamped. |