okokok, srsly you KNOW I love something when I stay up 'til 2 am reading it! this is just awesome. When does your first book come out? I'm not joking. you're an amazing author!

interesting.

I never have time to read fanfics anymore. : But I read the first chapter and it was awesome... I'll read again later. :)

SQUEALS.

Oh my gosh, this was such a cute ending! I'm a little confused by Caspian's "I don't want to be lied to anymore" line, but I'm super glad that they all get to stay together in Narnia. :) This has been such an amazing series; I can't even begin to describe how much I love this. Great job on all sixteen chapters of probably your best fanfic ever! Thanks so much for writing this for all of us to read avidly. Teehee. Love you!

Awesome story... It took so long for me to finish

reading it though... Haha. It's still good!

is it finished? cause if the story is complete u might wanna change it to completed

Awesome!

Everything all nicely wrapped up, everybody in-character and yet gloriously venturing outside it. *sigh of contentment* Just how it should all be.

Besides, since you haven't changed the status to completed, dare the loving, longing readers hope for more, in an epilogue?

That is a good ending, but maybe you should do an epilogue. The ending seems unfinshed some how.

... and all ends well. You leave me with a happy, fuzzy feeling. :D

Congratulations on a great, and completed, fic! *applauds*

I loved it!

AWESOME!

is there going to be a squel or anything?

aw

What a lovely ending! I really enjoyed reading this story!

Beautiful. Congratulations on the finishing of a great fanfiction!

Ah, what a great finale. You should write a sequel where all four of the Pevensies go with caspian on the Dawn Treader and maybe Eustace just falls in by himself or something! Excellent ending!

~redrose7856