Lol he recked his own future! That is karma for you though.

A very original take on "The Grandfather Paradox"

However, could the paradox be extended? In other words, by dying before he obtained the MMP, he wouldn't have been with the others to kill Ron in the first place?

Time travel implications...they are best considered while holding a chocolate-chip cookie.

Still, I like the tale.

Paradox is right. Monkey Fist from the future kills Ron. Changes in history erase future Monkey Fist. Nonexistent Future Monkey Fist unable to travel back in time to kill Ron. Universe explodes.

This is so morbid and twisted... I can't help but love the irony in it. I wonder what this means for Drakken, Shego, Killigan, and Kim in the alternate time stream. Such a well plotted, thought-provoking piece!

I hate it when people who don't get how time-travel works write stories about it.
Or if they do, they write like they don't.

nice fanfic. poor ron

OHEMGEE, poor Ron. Poor Kim. I even feel bad for Monty...only a little though. Great job though. A great "what-if" moment.

Gotta love stories that play around with time travel. XD

Original, interesting and well-written, and everyone was IC.

Nice! Well-written, and everybody in character (Monkey Fist's retort that "I think it's exhilarating!" is perfect). I wondered where this was going, but of course - Monty Fiske falls to his death in Cambodia, because he didn't have Kim to do the job for him. Very inventive, this fic. Good one.

Good job!

oO

nyaah, how horrible! But make sense...Good luck henever tried to kill Ron that time (we all no he actually can't do it becaus ehelove ron )

very good writing like ever.

Wow what a story!

Hm, certainly is an interesting take on the story and alternate time lines.

VN,

I was really intrigued by how you put this together. It looks like Monkey Fist got first-hand experience in the art of 'being careful what you wish for'.

I just wonder what kind of world was waiting for Killigan, Drakken, and Shego when they returned. That might be a good idea for a follow-up story you could try. That is, if you don't already have some other projects on your plate right now.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

Well in my opinion I can only say that I'm surprised that SHEGO didn't even thought of doing what Monkey Fist did.

Due to her controling the planet in her future made in "A Sirch In Time" but still for once, the villains won.

It was a twisted irony what happened to Monkey Fist but all in all it was something he had coming.

Talk about Karma huh?

Invader Johnny Signing Off.