an awesome take on the duel scene.

Oh I really enjoyed this

I just love Edmund!

I liked this pretty much! I think it's interesting that even if Peter was an excelent swordsman, Edmund was even better :)

Sigh. I really wish Edmund had more screen time. I keep rewatching the part of the battle where he's fighting with two swords. It would have been so awesome if he had fought in the duel instead of Peter...The whole two swords, three shields thing was epic! Nicely done.

Simply wonderful, and really plausible, too. :) A part of me wishes that this did happen, but of course, that's near impossible (seeing as how, well, the movie's done and all). Sigh. This would mean major exposure for dear Skandar.

Edmund the Just is really weird. But I love him. And twin-broad sword fighting? That's odd. It's like what the White Witch did (in the movie, with the wand and sword thing).

Nice. :) Keep writing. Thanks.

I liked Edmund to get a bigger part in the story - and especially fighting with two swords and the advantage of Miraz underestimating him. Nicely done!

Odd. But a good idea nonetheless. Where did you get the idea for the whole three shields/two swords thing?

woohoo, go edmund! _ the guy really is awesome _

Amazing story. Loved every minute!

It was nice! I like reading Edmund fics and I don't mind some brotherly bond ;)

Good job!

this is one of my top ten favs. it is so awesome. i was the 2nd movie a couple days ago, and i've become obcessed. the duel was my favorite part and could only have been better if ed actually did fight. you captured the moment magnificently and portreyed it just perfectly!

Very nice. I really liked how calm and assertive Edmund was in the movie and you really bring it to front here, well done.

LOVED It!

*High five* Go Edmund! Nicely done.

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