Thank you so much for writing this! I enjoyed every second/word of it!

Ah, damn...you made me cry again.

even tho i know how they got together on the show, this made me cry. it's beautifully written. thanks so much

Sigh of relief here - I actually thought you'd kill Bones off in the end, never been so glad to be wrong! Great story.

Sigh of relief here - I actually thought you'd kill Bones off in the end, never been so glad to be wrong! Great story.

You had Zach's character down perfectly.

chapter 6 is sooooo cute. I love awkward Brennan, asking Booth to go out with her. :) :)

DAMN...

Simple, but effective (If mysterious); EXCELLENT job.

Brennan’s emotions after learning that Booth was dead were very well-described, perfectly reflecting the guilt and pain that they REALLY should have shown in more depth in the show- I sometimes wonder if she just ‘shut down’ emotionally after Booth ‘died’, although I admit I may have read “The Beauty and the Tragedy” once too often-, combined with an excellent analysis of her fear at the possibility of her telling Booth how she feels, culminating in her own natural relief when she takes that step with Booth and learns that it’s not ACTUALLY as terrifying as she thought it was going to be.

Plus, of course, you manage to work in some very in-character moments; Cam’s comment about “Well, thank you Zack for that horribly awkward and scientific look into Dr. Brennan's personal life” is DEFINITELY something I could imagine her saying...

Admittedly, I’m a bit surprised that Brennan failed to realise the similarities between Grayson and Pam earlier, but I suppose it’s not like Booth would have told her EVERYTHING Pam said to him in the ‘original’ timeline, and you definitely included enough references to the original ‘WitW’ to make it clear that Brennan knew enough, so in the end it doesn’t matter.

All that matters is that, whether through higher intervention or a REALLY freaky ‘precognitive dream’, Brennan saw what her life would be like without Booth, and realised that she could no longer take the chance of not being with him when she could (Now, if she’d only realise that in the ACTUAL series, we’re set).

Keep up the good work!

Aw, it's like a little Bones fairytale! I love this! Just enough twists in the storyline to make it interesting while still letting Brennan feel like she's reliving things. :)

You are an amazing writer! I am so glad that this story had a happy ending, I was reading on the edge of my seat so to speak, and I probably would have cried if it was sad! Hope you write another story soon!

Fascinating story. I'm so glad that Booth didn't die the second time around.

I don't think there's a bad thing I can say about this fic. It was original, wonderfully written, in character... I absolutely loved it. Fantastic job.

What a lovely story. So nice to read a Wannabe fic that's more than a one-shot! I loved the way you reversed the case and everything, that was awesome, though I did think Grayson was going to try and shoot Booth and Brennan would be the one to step in front of him. Their dates were so cute! It was nice the way you had Brennan dealing with something she totally wouldn't believe possible normally, in that she couldn't believe it wasn't something that had actually happened. Did that make sense? Anyway, I loved it, made me happy after watching the season finale :( A fic that shines out among the rest! Thanks!

Great story. Freaked me out a little in chapter 12, but then you came back with a beautiful ending in 13. Well done.

Fantastic ending! :D

I really thought you killed him again!

I was like no not again! lol

Good thing he made it! :D

Love your Story! I hope you're already working on the next one! :D